AlienWarlord
dude, please mess with the plot more.. makes your mc alive.. not just sidekick who follow the flows.. right now mc is just a bystander.. it's fanfiction, so if u can show what happens when mc walk in this world, that will be great 👍🏻.. don't just follow the story.. makes the story revolve around mc.. mc perspective.. your story from start is great.. a whole new views from mc perspective.. now before you go on further, my comment is just.. this is fanfiction with it's own story.. not a non living story who just follow the original mcu.. sorry if i offended you or anyone.. please consider this as my opinion alone.. take it in as u see fit.. Thanks for the great story ☺️