Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

You had me in the first part. It was awesome. Loved the battle scene. But the 2nd part leaves a bad aftertaste. Out of all things I especially hate low IQ MC and Mind control. While thankfully it is not the former, unfortunately it is borderline the latter. Combined with your sporadic update schedule it's gonna be a painful experience. And I do believe the Gods could've done better and intentionally dealt a bad hand to MC just so that he could provide more entertainment. Whatever this is, was not their but they became lax in the first place to have some kind of entertainment.

nothing beats reading about this chaotic protagonist who makes most fanfic protagonists look like idiots, would love to see ophis in the harem

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter and dyamn that was too long....hope you divide the future chapters into parts so it would be convenient to read

thanks for the Chapter

Thanks for the chapter!!!!! Mongrels!!!!!!

Well...now I have my response to the Corruption, feel right thinking about it and interesting as a development 🤔, plus it will give Yozora a meaning to better himself and beat Gil....Hope Aqua won't do something that will put Yozora on a long and sorrowful travel to save/revive her from her own stupidity 🙄.......sooo Thanks for the GREAT New Chapter 👍🏻 Author-san

Thanks for the update. I really enjoy your work!!!

ty 4 the chap

welcome back, hope you are well and your problem is solved. thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter author san...😁😁😁

thanks for the chapter

Gracias por el capítulo ( por favor más capítulos 🙇)

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chp