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Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Atrejas
AtrejasLv13Atrejas

bellatrix in harem is like 90% of Hp fanfics so na pls no just make an oc

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KUROSAMA
KUROSAMALv5KUROSAMA

is this the grandaugther

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LeficiosTV
LeficiosTVLv14LeficiosTV

Thanks for the chapter.

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S464_SpRingFielD
S464_SpRingFielDLv4S464_SpRingFielD

Waiting for Aqua

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_Monarch
_MonarchLv14_Monarch

thanks for the chapter

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neis_marko
neis_markoLv3neis_marko

will they be in the harem?:Shokugeki no Soma---- Erina Nakiri-Megumi Tadokoro-Momo Akanegakubo-Jun Shiomi-Hisako Arato-Rindō Kobayashi-Alice Nakiri-Nao Sadatsuka-Sonoka Kikuchi-Taki Tsunozaki-Urara Kawashima-Yua Sasaki-Madoka Enomoto-Yūki Yoshino-Ryōko Sakaki

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WhyKevin
WhyKevinLv14WhyKevin

Thanks for the chap! Been enjoying this so far

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SirZed
SirZedLv14SirZed

Honestly, I really enjoy your FF. BUT please don't focus too much on the HAREM aspect of the story. It usually ruins the story for me/us. Two tips I can give is, continue with the Interludes from different POV's. They are enjoyable to read and they give a certain depth to the story. And that lastly, do try to update at a regular schedule. It feels sporadic and these stories tend to get lost in the middle of the other storylines from different FF's. Anyway continue with this great story please!

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icedeathgod24
icedeathgod24Lv13icedeathgod24

great chapter thanks for your work

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Infinite_01
Infinite_01Lv2Infinite_01

thanks for the chapter

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Redald
RedaldLv11Redald

Thanks for the chapiter

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RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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Fuuka_Stich
Fuuka_StichLv15Fuuka_Stich

More pls

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Nekomancer99
Nekomancer99Lv4Nekomancer99

When he goes to chi*a will be just set up a mass ritual to use a b**od cur*e version of his coughing b**od spell on all the young masters there just for s*it's and gi**les. Like a prank version not the one that had the h**mful output the first time.

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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

Thanks for the Chapter 😁 and aim for both

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rafa_espi
rafa_espiLv2rafa_espi

Debo decir que no me esperaba las adiciones aunque no me quejo :). Si bien no estoy en contra de la adición de bellatrix no veo la manera de unirla después de todo esta loca, literalmente, por voldemort. Finalmente Buen .5

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Daniel_Videla
Daniel_VidelaLv1Daniel_Videla

Estoy a favor de bellatrix

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Okhwang725
Okhwang725Lv3Okhwang725

Mr. Choi that you mentioned is the one from lookism by any chance?

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Xequalcross
XequalcrossLv4Xequalcross

Please don't add Bellatrix. It just doesn't fit.

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sharky130
sharky130Lv1sharky130

I'm not a big fan of Bellatrix in the harem

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Spectre_67
Spectre_67Lv4Spectre_67

Thanks for the chapter. Author you surely know how to keep the plot intresting