Stuckinapileofbook
Honestly, I really enjoy your FF. BUT please don't focus too much on the HAREM aspect of the story. It usually ruins the story for me/us. Two tips I can give is, continue with the Interludes from different POV's. They are enjoyable to read and they give a certain depth to the story. And that lastly, do try to update at a regular schedule. It feels sporadic and these stories tend to get lost in the middle of the other storylines from different FF's. Anyway continue with this great story please!