Comments of chapter undefined of The Record of Orc Civilization

I know I'll start skipping over all the explaining of the moves and the speeches soon with how long and pointless most of them feel.

good chapter, although the grammar aside, the "MC" speaks as if there were other users of that martial art or they had taught him, he should pass them off as if he created them by observing animals, nature, meditation, inspiration, or a divine revelation, already That this could be a mental doubt of the orcs? I imagine a scenario in which a magician captures one of those orcs and reads his memories, he finds this situation strange since there is no such way of fighting or martial art on the continent, In addition, there will be gods, if it were me I would edit it, but that is simply my opinion.

thanks for the chapter

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