Comments of chapter undefined of Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation
Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation
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coldpyr0:Eh, he can still do that. Once he's stronger he can brainwash whole groups of noble and slowly become the shadow ruler of even more than the country he's in. The upper crust would be ridiculously easy to corrupt, barring the warrior noble types of course unless they already partake in the sin he uses.
I know he is inexperienced and all now but after he defeats this e rank party more people will come with more strength and higher experience you can't give the same reason again and again and you have put #overpowered tag in your story so show him dominating his future enemies............don't make it like when he goes more powerful then similarly more powerful villains show up and the cycle continues.
Think you’re a good writer and the story has some great points going for it. Slightly concerned you’re just chain spawning new woman though. That tends to lead to forgotten charcters. We also have zero to little real personaility for them, we’ve also had a bunch of scene and yet the two first indroduced girls who I thought would be important haven’t even got a chapter, which just makes all the woman feel unimportant. Creates a feeling we wont get to see any of them fleshed out.
