MisterImmortal
Hmmm... The story turned cringy. And above all, illogical. Everyine accepting these things so easily... its frustrafting. Dunno, but all this misery all the time turns me down. I am not sure I will continue a lot more into the novel. It irks me a lot. And especially all the torment, pain, crippling 24/7 and all the things. And then everyone just accepts too much all the time. Just so that the "mastermind" of Masan can do what he wants? Nah, somehow it triggers me a lot. Hmmm.... :/
I for one think this arc is going to absolutely amazing, your doing some really great work and the world building is amazing. Plus idk what else all these people can do other than accept the fact the Sylvester is dead, like what are they supposed to do search the entire desert for him when they have a war to prepare for, also I totally feel like this is going to tie back into the part where Sylvester’s mom almost died and he almost went to the dark side I feel like we’re going to see a more unhinged Sylvester and then watch him get broken and reamerage from this mentally and physically stronger setting him up for the pope’s position
MisterImmortal:Well, I said it in synopsis. MC is very smart, but there do exist people smarter than him. As for accepting the situation. What can the people even do? Elven king isn't accepting it though. As for Sylvester, it's going to be an extremely important arc for him. Remember what Inquisitor High Lord said in the first few chaps. The Divine Desert has a template in the middle of it. Reaching it is impossible, but those who did and returned proceeded to become some of the greatest people in history. Also, Shadow Knight just saw everything happen without meddling. Why? There are many things going on in the background that will be revealed in this arc.
Hmm so he has that worldsight from his father and that is why he can see the girl. I bet the girl is in the desert and who would save him. Also, the reason why the king of elves can’t find his is because of the dark stone poison. Now I wonder if he would shift to the dark side because of the dark stone draining his light powers and activate something like the void keepers power to restore his limbs or would be a fear to give chonky a body or simple revive the cat. I expect this arc to be an hard cap of max and all his gains.