Comments of chapter undefined of DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

I hope the situation is resolved quickly. I think someday David will be disappointed into the leagues because of arrogance or methods of dealing with criminals and in protest and disagreement with them will create Atilan, as the home of all the rejected methumans. Looking forward to the mass release of the chapters.

They really wasn’t a strong reason for David to run away tbh. Hawkwoman was the only one who showed any real aggression. Batman, WW, and Superman seemed to be willing hear out the situation. Zatana and Constantine were speculating about raven but really didn’t make any firm decisions either. They weren’t exactly in mortal danger.

Do they not know about his insane mental defence? why would they assume he was under her control it's illogical

don't mind me

I was waiting for Blackbolt to sign "Touch her and we will have WORDS" or something along those lines, Blackbolt has a ton of phrases he can communicate that sound absolutely nuts

I hope David teach that arrogant birdy a lesson and again another cliffhanger... I'm gonna try stop reading this for a few weeks, the waiting part is just painful

Thanks for the chapter, it was nice seeing intelligent decisions taking place, instead of hero team attacking instantaneously. Also did you know that, Moose weigh about 1700 pounds, have a height about 7 feet from the shoulders measured, they are also excellent swimmers and divers, they can dive up to 20 feet in search for food. They can also run up to 45 m/ph and run through 6 feet deep of snow with around 15 m/ph. They also don't really need a reason to attack. So be careful of Moose and don't feed them. to all of you have good or night.

I like Oliver in this series. His mustache jokes are hilarious to me

Hawkwoman is immortal so TECHNICALLY it’s not killing her to say a friendly hello right? 😆

How old is Raven right now? The prophecies for her should be nearing. Dr. Fate and the Witch Boy should've started hunting her.

Thanks for the chapter :) Maybe next Chapter David and Raven will call Robin, thus starting the beginnings of a new Team: The Teen Titans.

In heavy need of mass release

this is for me my favourite fic of yours by far all the characters are amazing olivers great batmans awesome like this is how batman is. take me stones

Thanks for the chapter 😁👍🍵

TFTC

Helblazer not taker

Thanks for the chapter

Batman knows about his mind is proteced, how would she even control him?

LE GASP!!!