Crimson_ink
I'm out. I don't want to say anything bad again. I must just state some problem here. First, the logic and reasoning of characters here are on a level similar to a teen, no problem here except for Arlo. He really acts like a child. I will ask you, how a man become mature for all his training to be strong? This is already a mature character yet he is forcefully turn into a child. Second, without the weapon, is the MC stregth less than 10? And it explicitly told in the previous chapter that having 10 or 11 as foundation is good before temprering. Yet, is was disregarded like the author never wrote it. Third, the curse of attracting trouble is magnified. And the system support it, like it was saying, "You're the MC, shine shine, nobody can kill you. Even the person behind your obesity". And may more problems I would rathere not say. I'm not like this, I expected a lot for the first few chapters, but this expectation is crushed. I don't know now, I expect the author read this. I wish that the quality will become better for the readers that will read this. This novel has a lot of potential. But before that potential is harness, I will drop this. I wish the author a lot of good luck.