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Comments of chapter undefined of The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed]

Bad_Weathers
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Highgschool DxD can come later. Fairy Tail for a dragon army and kingdom. Go yo Solo Levelling and make Antares submit. Tensura and Snu-Snu with Velzard, force Guy to turn back to his original form

Rey_ark
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To be fair it is an inevitable to have a big harem for a multiverse story Personally I like big harem I have 0 problem with pokemon collector as long as there's sweet romance scene for every heroines. The best example would be Stealing spree that novel have the best scene time management for 40+ heroine. For fanfiction side Akikan's novel probably a good example too. If you did go to DxD world in future arc. let's be real it's gonna be at least 15 girls to get in that world alone. My personal favorite are Asia,Ravel,Kuroka,Shirone,Valerie,Irina,and Ingvild.

SteelWolfAlchemist
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World recommendation: fairy tail

jeanpierregerardo
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oks

Destroyer404
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Its nice to have a harem developement tbh unlike in Highschool DxD S2 where almost everyone just forgotten Asia and the author made her like a side character

Daoistlf8V7m
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let girls stay in their own size so that they can learn concepts, in each new world 1-2 of them come with them, slow down the time in size, 1 day inside and 1 year outside, girls do not feel alone, mc hangs comfortably

CoffeeAficionado
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Part of the reason I like big harems is due to the fact of how many women are written into these stories with either sad or tragic endings. Look at canon Naruto. Beginning of Boruto we find out Mei, Tsunade, Anko, Kurenai, Samui, Mabui, Shizune have all been left alone. People keep asking for very specific ones to be added or part of the omniverse, then upset that the authors bring in more of the background ones. As an author, you are either forced to bring in one from the series, thus neglecting all the other ones from it or have 100+ women harems. "Oh, Hinata should be one of the waifus (not arguing that by the way) but screw off Sakura (because original author couldn't be bothered to write her well)". And the hate on for Yuri stuff just makes no sense. If the wife was going for another guy, I get it, that is saying MC is not providing something they could for the wife. However going for yuri on the other hand, the MC physically can not provide certain experiences to the wife. It's not a dig on the MC, its a biological thing. End of rant.

lobizon
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If you want to make a well-developed harem, read "Origin" by the author GenoXX and the other "The Epic of Leviathan" by the author InGlorious. The two have trips through different animes with the harem or some girls with character development and worlds, of course not all the girls but some have their moments and uses. (Google translator)