Night_Star_Gaze
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So angsty. Why are you having him act like a kid when he's an adult mentally.
I get angry seeing his stupid behavior, but what can a 13yr old mentally do?. maybe if he lived 20 years old on earth it would be different.
Honestly I'm enjoying it so far I'm not a critic and I don't write my own stories so why should I tell someone whether or not they do something right id say for a 13 yr old mentality it's pretty accurate