Comments of chapter undefined of Pioneer System: Game of Thrones
Pioneer System: Game of Thrones
PhantomMedjay
Chapter comments16
Ok first of all, will all the chapters be as big as this one, if yes than I'm all in. Now for a constructive comment, I would suggest that don't mix the fic with ' Paladin of Old Gods' fic. That would complicate things. Also will you name the samurai and shinobi heroes? Or are they just show pieces with imaginary presence? In addition, can you share the image of MC's and his summons. I know it's a hassle but it brings life to the fic, when reading and knowing how a character really looks.
i am looking forward to the next chapter. this looks like it will be primarily a kingdom building story, which i totally love. can you focus more on his training, i would love for Ezio to train him in assassination, i think its really cool for a heir of a noble house to be able to kill someone in a crowded room and no one notice it was him maybe have some aids who work as he assassin/bodyguards? assassin organizations are way more op that people make them out to be, they literally kill people all over the world and nobody knows it was them (if they even figure out the victim was killed and not just dying under unfortunate circumstances). please continue with this story, if you keep the chapter length so long the a gap between releases is to be expected but please continue.
