Draul_TheOminous
I liked it. I like wish fulfillment done right. But most wish fulfillments are garbage. The protagonist gets wishes from god or a system and everything is easy for him. Which is too boring. I mean there are good stories with overpowered protagonist but most of them are original novels. Because in originals we have a sense of curiosity for the world along with the protagonist who has no knowledge of said world. But in fanfiction, especially when the the protagonist has meta knowledge (which is a already a cheat in my opinion) we don't have that sense of curiosity about the world since we already know most things about it and so does the protagonist. Atleast I want to see how a normal person will struggle, and even thrive and grow powerful in a world like this. Going back to meta knowledge being a cheat. I feel system and wishes are unnecessary superhero fanfictions, Where there are various ways to gain power if one has the knowledge. Especially in Marvel where most superhero and villains are usually normal people that gain powers either by an accident or an experiment. And there are also many ways in DC but fewer than Marvel since DC is more about Gods among Men While Marvel is Man becomes God.
Yeah author being realist is good. But then you have mutants, gods, Demons, magic magical omnipotent stones, and you have an invasion every month. I wanna see the idiot who have metaknowledge and doesn't abuse it, because he wants to live a normal life in a world where dying is normal during a hero vs villain battle. And don't forget the yearly reality warper with the power to eliminate your existence
This was a nice break form other fan fictions for sure. Clear and engaging text. No hero syndrome either, a good thing, much too common in Marvel, DC and MHA fanfictions. Reading this I genuinely felt like this is how one would react if one was suddenly dumped into a new world. Moreover this didn't feel like those 'Mu Uhu' fanfictions where you can just tell from the second chapter that there is no real attempt at a character of the MC just brain-dead wish fulfilment.
this MC is very carefree.. 😂😂 the first day he wakes up in a world with mutants. he is only happy to be young and decides to go to sleep.. On the second day he decides to go for a walk around the city. He doesn't seem to care about how he got there, what happened to his stay in the world, he works or is a olgazan, has parents or is an orphan, if he is occupying the place of his young "I" in that world, or what his identity is.. 🤔🤔🤔🤔
Nice chapter author![img=recommend] I like the way you start the story. The Mc is slowly coming to grips with his new reality, on his own terms, like a normal person. In some stories the Mc just gets over it, like it doesn’t concern him. Just like you said, they start making plans straight away. I mean.. cmon, I know its a fanfic but you can make it more realistic... you did a good job author. It’s refreshing.[img=update]
guys, you have to remember that so far mc has not shown anything special, nothing, there are trillions or quadrillions of living beings in the marvel universe, and why would mc think he could become the strongest without having anything special? he himself said that he didn't feel anything different, that he's still human without any power, even if he used the knowledge he has, it wouldn't help anything, and he also has to remember that mc just got out of an existential crisis, he's satisfied with just living a normal life, even if it means dying afterwards
I would ask about the thought process of being a realist in an unreal world… but I’m a little afraid of the author opening up a philosophical discussion. The protagonist isn’t being a realist, he’s going into denial. Anyone who wakes up in Marvel is going to seek out the strength necessary to live without the overwhelming pressure and fear of a meaningless death.