Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Crusader
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Every points you said are valid. Yes, if it had happened that way then it would have been much better. I could have taken another route but my idea was limited. Also WO was the first book I ever wrote, the mistake are glaring and it wasn’t well thought off. If I’m to rewrite WO at this level and experience i have gathered, it will be much better. My new book is coming out soon, I’m sure you will like this one even better cause I do.
Kazumayagami:I mean think about it it would make more sense if it happened at the start of the novel instead of mc getting betrayed after an arc it would make more sense if it was the prologue of the novel that way mc doesn’t have to rely on some stupid devil that tried to kill Kim. And remember when that monster that mc gained his inheritance appeared wouldn’t it be better if he mc was trained by him instead that way he can take his revenge on the houses by starting with his aunty instead of having to ask her where the dragons are and his sister sealing his strength and stoping the sword from answering mc questions mc should be the one on top.
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