Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Where’s part 2 ???

I believe ALL authors could take a page from this scene when it comes to creating true intimacy and also how to tastefully write a scene such as this!!! well done Jasmine! I think I felt more from this chapter than I have from any other scene of this nature, regardless of the author! and ZERO second hand embarrassment! thanks for the update!

Malachi is about to take his time and help bring a little enjoyment in Ravina's life and help relax completely

The Ravina and Malachi before knowing her sister has been found are back. They need a break, just to be...

This chapter kind of leaves you forgetting where you are until it ends. 🔥🔥🔥

Loved this sweet sweet chapter!! I also love that even though they were both caught up in the moment He wanted to honor her an respect her wishes!!

How much longer can Ravina and Malachi hold out before their bodies become one? Malachi is doing a great job of controlling his desire for Ravina; however, she has given him pleasure that lessened his sexual tension.

I was literally pulled in the tub and could snese the release of tense and the 🔥that heated the water! Dang…..that was a intense chapter!

Ummmmmm Where’s the rest dear author? 😅😂

That is such a sweet chapter with Kai and Ravi. Leaving one gasping for more.

Ravina and all us be like… 🔥🔥🔥 🤣

𝙒𝙤𝙬!! 𝙄 𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙖 𝙬𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙚 𝙗𝙤𝙬𝙡 𝙤𝙛 𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙝𝙤𝙩 𝙘𝙝𝙤𝙬𝙙𝙚𝙧 𝙬𝙝𝙞𝙡𝙚 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙚𝙧. 𝘼𝙨 𝙝𝙤𝙩 𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙤𝙪𝙥 𝙬𝙖𝙨...𝙞𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙨 𝙢𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙚𝙧!!! 𝙏𝙤 𝙗𝙚 𝙝𝙤𝙣𝙚𝙨𝙩...𝙄 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙧𝙚𝙢𝙚𝙢𝙗𝙚𝙧 𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙝𝙤𝙬𝙙𝙚𝙧!!!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥🍜❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

I mean I guess he wants her first time to be special and not in Ares’ home lol Great chapter we are getting there. Now what will he do to eas her frustration hmm 🤔 I’ so ready! Hopefully it’ 2 chapters tomorrow I know I’ selfish I’m sorry 😊

Oh yeah let’s get that freaky deaky!!! JAZZY JAZZ JAZZ 💯

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Alrighty then!!

How far will they hold back