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Marianne33
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As much as this was a sad and painful chapter, they also needed this talk. To let out the anger and pain so they can be loving brothers again. I can tell they care deeply for each other and the tragedy had separated them. This is a first step to working through the pain and their differences and rebuild their bond of brotherhood ๐Ÿ™

Lynette_Lucas
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I am very please with the manner in which this chapter ended. Malachi showed his brothers how much he has matured and his best option for wise counsel came to pay him a visit.

Jesk8
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Malachi is using the momentum to spur changes and to create a peaceful coexistence.

Needmorecoffee
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So much wisdom and so much to be learned from this chapter. Chanan had once said that he doesn't believe in punishment but consequences. We all face consequences of our actions, good or bad, sooner or later. But it is never too late. You can always plant those good seeds and I can't help but find the dandelion as a symbol when Malachi walks out and the seeds flow in the air. The dandelion being the symbol of growth and healing.

K_Deck
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I was wondering if Saul was really on the side of peace. I think he is. He just carries such a burden, like so many others in this story. I guess it goes along with the saying โ€œeveryone is fighting a battle you know nothing about, so be kind.โ€

Sacoguns
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๐™„ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐™Ž๐™–๐™ช๐™ก ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ข๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™–๐™ง๐™ค๐™ช๐™ฃ๐™™. ๐™„ ๐™™๐™ค๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐™๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™–๐™œ๐™–๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™– ๐™–๐™จ ๐™ข๐™ช๐™˜๐™ ๐™–๐™จ ๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™—๐™š๐™œ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ. ๐˜พ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™๐™–๐™ง๐™™, ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ข๐™š๐™จ. ๐™„ ๐™๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™š ๐™Ž๐™–๐™ช๐™ก ๐™ข๐™š๐™š๐™ฉ๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™š ๐™๐™š ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ซ๐™š ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™—๐™š ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ซ๐™š๐™™ ๐™—๐™–๐™˜๐™ . ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ขโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

Lynette_Lucas
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chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Both Malachi and Saul needed that talk, letting all that emotions bottled up inside out, it's to make them understand each other more, for them to be much wiser in their decisions and to be able to carry on with their responsibilities and duties with dignity. Malachi has come a long way!. tack Jazzy๐Ÿ˜

emillerdc
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Many realizations in this chapter! Weโ€™re one step closer to healing and peace โœจ

Kemistics_01
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The first steps, identifying and accepting the part that one played; Hopefully, Saul's healing will begin . Malachi will be that much more sensitive towards Darcy while he is there for Ravina.

DespinaNY
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Way to go Jasmine with another infamous quote to close a very overwhelming chapter. ๐Ÿ’—โœจ

JP_reader20
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Tina_Roberts_1551
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They both need a hug

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Such a heart felt chapter. Malachi and Saul share a storm of emotions. Malachi's realization for what his sister had gone and his understanding that he can blame no one but himself and letting Saul in on this understanding that Saul needs to stop blaming others also. It wasn't Ravina's fault that their father and them attacked Ravina's family or any of the others that were killed and hopefully Saul will come to that understanding also. My heart hurts for all of them. Malachi has proven that he will stand by Ravina for peace.

Angelbugg6
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Beautiful chapter ๐Ÿฅน

Tina_Roberts_1551
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Kia and Saul has to let go of the past to heal so they can be a better person. Maybe one day saul can find love again

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Overwhelming enotional chapter! Malchi knowing Darcy went through what his sister didโ€ฆthat realization was the key to him confronting Saul. Not that was Malchiโ€™ s intention but Saul anger setting off the chain of opening up the truth of their past! Everyone has something in their past that can hold them back or making them stronger and better. Each person has to choose to let goโ€ฆwhich only brings misery or let go and grow! The ending with Chan was such a graceful ending to a emotional chapter๐Ÿ’•

Tina_Roberts_1551
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Some time you go threw storm to help us to be a better person and to be stronger

Ruz_Brukiville
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Marina_Maura
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