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Bouchra_Siroua
Bouchra_SirouaLv14Bouchra_Siroua

Jasmine never had such complicated relationships between her leads in any of her books before, and that us what I liked about her writing! what is going on now? Don't tell me that the smelling thing would be an issue between the sisters, and please Don't tell me that Malachi and Ephraim had been mistaken about their true breedmates!!

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

Those who clash the hardest become the closest sometimes because they feed off each other's energy. Malachi is wise to see at the end that Corinnas' comment was a positive one. He said he heard "expectancy" and he knows that means there is something to work toward which he is already doing but will probably do harder now and Corinna isn't closed off to the idea. She believes there is a change but doesn't know if it is enough but there is also a wish to see more. She expects more. Malachi was nervous but he handled it well. No excuses and a lot of reassurance. He also in a way hinted at her to expect more when speaking of "taking steps" and expectancy he got. Great conversation. Went better than I expected ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ. Love that most characters are rational and Malachi is dealing with the nicer siblings and not like Ravina who had to deal with Saul ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ˜‚ Also! They felt the pull guys!! I am sorry but I find it an exciting twist ๐Ÿคฃ

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FormerPD2020
FormerPD2020Lv15FormerPD2020

WOW! A better first meeting between Malachi and Corinna than I thought, but they have a LONG WAY to go

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

I hope Corinna will eventually be able to confide in Ravina all that she went through before Ephraimโ€™s mem saved her. Ravina needs to know, and so does Malachi, frankly. He needs to know his lack of care created this impact on someone very dear to his future queen. Itโ€™s time to do better, all around.

JP_reader20
JP_reader20Lv15JP_reader20

I know she has gone through a lot of horrible things, as well as Ravina has had her share, but I feel that Ravina is more open minded than Corinna.

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

Iโ€™m dissapointed that Corinna was the one to pull away first. I expected more from Malachi. He sat there lost in a dazeโ€ฆ I keep thinking about the dream Ravina had early on of her past life. Someone betrayed the other. I really hope we arenโ€™t setting the stage for a betrayal amongst mates here.

Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

Pheeeeww; A very interesting, interrogative conversation between Corinna and Kai. The sisters have more in common than just their looks.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

The first meeting between Malachi and Corrina went better than I expected. Based on Malachiโ€™s and Corrinaโ€™s initially being physically mesmerized by each otherโ€™s appearance and scent, I believe Malachi and Ephraim are biologically related. But Malachi is the more alluring one.

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

What I expected between Malchi and Corrina. The conversation was subtle but to the point. I get Corrina didnt see or now Malchiโ€™s past, especially his sister. It willl take time but I am sure she will learn from seeing and what Ravinia will tell her. What about the scent Malchi picked up and Corrina had the same experience. Not sure about that revelation that both her and Ravania is experiencing. Wonderful Chapter!๐Ÿ’•

Adrijana26
Adrijana26Lv15Adrijana26

Could malachai and ephraim be half brothers? If not then this is definatley a twin thing and they all better talked to eachother about it or watch out ๐Ÿ˜‚ . Initial meet between malachai and corinna went better than expected but I hope he stops her and asks her what is wrong or maybe if he really thinks hard about it he will figure it out himself as that was the only thing she brought up so hopefully he will get the hint. Canโ€™t wait for more!

Daoist1twLHF
Daoist1twLHFLv14Daoist1twLHF

What in the switch up is going on here? Jazzy Lady

Kemistics_01
Kemistics_01Lv14Kemistics_01

Progress starts with small steps. Malachi and Corinna bumping into each other was kismet, ensuring they had a conversation and an understanding of minds of what they thought of each other and how they could move forward. Now, the smells they had similar to their other partners, who will bring it up first with their partners? Could the twins bring it up? So far no.

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Jesk8
Jesk8Lv15Jesk8

Corinnaโ€™s and Malachiโ€™s first encounter went better than expected. At least, that incident is over, no more having to worry about seeing the other at another point in time.

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

๐˜พ๐™ค๐™ง๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฃ๐™– ๐™™๐™ค๐™š๐™จ๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ฎ๐™š๐™ฉ, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™๐™š๐™ง ๐™›๐™ž๐™ง๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™š๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™ˆ๐™–๐™ก๐™–๐™˜๐™๐™ž ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™ฉ ๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™š ๐™– ๐™—๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™—๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™–'๐™จ ๐™›๐™ž๐™ง๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™š๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ. ๐™Ž๐™ค, ๐™„ ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ค๐™  ๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™–๐™จ ๐™– ๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐™ฅ๐™ค๐™จ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™จ๐™ช๐™˜๐™˜๐™š๐™จ๐™จ๐™›๐™ช๐™ก ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง๐™–๐™˜๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ!!! ๐Ÿ˜…โ™ฅ๏ธ

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Cornia is right he need to work on thing to make His kingdom a better place

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Ruz_BrukivilleLv15Ruz_Brukiville

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