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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

AshleyNKV
AshleyNKVLv14AshleyNKV

This chapter is a little hard to read. it is hard to determine who is talking, especially the first part of the chapter. Having more descriptors, scene info, or characters identified when speaking would help a lot.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Ravina and Ares definitely brings balance to Malachi and Nazneen. Their intelligence and how to cope with things is astounding. Could help the dragon race immensely. Just the same as how dragons would be able to help humans. Would be beneficial for them if they all worked together. I think the young dragons would be up for it.šŸ˜Š tack JazzyšŸ’•

kodash1
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Can't wait to see what other trick is Nazneen going to teach Ravina to make Malachi go crazy šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

Zandra_Gonzalez
Zandra_GonzalezLv14Zandra_Gonzalez

Team work makes the dream work!! Admire Ravinaā€™s resolve in the face of adversity! Powerful people know their worth and how to manage themselves no matter what otherā€™s do!! Great Chapter Jazz!!!

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

I enjoy that Nanzeen is learning from Ravina (and vice versa) and Malachi and Ares are also working together. Ares has some things to show Malachi about leadership and I look forward to him implementing some of those ideas. Thanks for the update, Jasmine!

JasmineJosef
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Adrijana26
Adrijana26Lv15Adrijana26

Loved these 2 chapters everyone is getting closer and more open to eachother. Still canā€™ wait for ravina and corina to meet though. I wonder what nazneen and ravina will converse about. Soo glad you back jaz!

NingboCH
NingboCHLv15NingboCH

Love this chapter, thanks Jasmine. Iā€™m thrilled to read the story about them fouršŸ˜

Marina_Sch
Marina_SchLv14Marina_Sch

I am soooo excited about your come back, Jasmine! šŸ¤© welcome back!! Canā€˜t wait for more šŸ¤©šŸ„³

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I very much enjoyed this chapter and the one released on Saturday. They were water for my thirst for high quality fantasy romance. Corrina and Ephraim have a beautiful and loving relationship. They need to tie the knot soon because they could become expectant parents in the near future if they are not already. I would like to see Corina and Ravina have children growing up together as playmates. At first, Ravina must get over her fears about getting pregnant.

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

That was so cool how naz took ravina with her like they was best friend

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Please dont kill aries let ravina find a cure for him so naz and him can have there happy end

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Seems like Malachi and Nazneen are learning from Ares and Ravina as well as the other way around. The couples are definitely balancing each their partners.

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

These two chapters has brought everything closer. Loved Ravania taking charge and. It letting others talk about her. Then all four walsking together and then Naz pulls Ravania away as Malachi ā€brideā€ hmmmā€¦ that was interesting. The whole chapter just brought me back to why I love this book!! Awesome šŸ„°

Nicole_90
Nicole_90Lv15Nicole_90

Loving the new bonds from these guys ares and kai make me laugh hopefully see some good times ahead be nice when ephiam joins the bro gang too dragon half sea demon and half dragon ā¤ļø powerful alliance

Fitoria_01
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P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

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Malechi_Matilda
Malechi_MatildaLv13Malechi_Matilda

Ares and Ravina has good leadership qualities and that helps to bring out the best in Malachi and Nazneen

Qezzy_G7
Qezzy_G7Lv15Qezzy_G7

JasmineJosef I missed you darling! thank you for returning to us with more chapters šŸ’œšŸ’œ

Hollygolightly
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