Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

So Ravina was told when she officially mates with Malachi it would result in healing and the loss of some of her scars. Ares is at least half human. Would he not receive at least some health benefit from being with Nazneen? I don’t buy what this witch man is saying…

I thought Saul might tell Malachi... and now there are even more secrets. My heart just keeps breaking for Ares. He is such a good man and keeps getting the short end of the stick. 😞

Saul, I think it'll be best to tell Malachi bout what Joel did. And Ares..I heart you❤️ tack Jazzy💕

At least Joel had enough sense to tell Saul. Now, let’s see what the dear brothers plan to do.

So Sad…Ares is not going to live, his heart is weaken from living on land. Poor Naz, it just so hard to see them connecting but so many questions the witch brought up. The witch cursed her but only to teach we and make her stronger. 🥲 Guilt finally got the best of Joel. Surprised he told Saul and doible suprised how Saul took what Joel did and wasn’t ’ expecting that reaction. Truthfully, Saul should tell Malchi and they can work together. Jaz you really out did yourself on this chapter⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🌟

The only thing I am thinking of right now is... he can't be dying right? I couldn't have come this far to read about his death. This witch must have missed something... please.. I haven't read this authors previous work. Does she kill characters? Help me!

There has to be some way Ares’ heart can be strengthened so that he will have the normal lifespan of a half human/half sea demon. He and Nazneen deserve to have a happily ever-after with children and grandchildren.

Poor Ares. I am so heartbroken 💔 for him. Although, the witch seemed to be interested enough to maybe try to help lengthen Ares life or is the witch telling him a lie.

I hope saul will do the right thing and go tell his brother what Joel and tell him everything that going on

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I can‘t believe Ares is really dying… but Joel put himself for sure in trouble 😮‍💨 and this witcher… is he actually in love with Nazneen? 🤔

Ares must live and not die!

I hope Arie will be ok i dont trust that witch it see like the witch wants naz if I was Joel I would go tell kia what he did

suddenly, I feel like not finishing this if Ares is going to die, and Nazneen will stay by herself without her breedmate, they deserve their happy ending!

I really hope it don’t go like that. Aries n nazneen deserve happiness too!

I wonder how long witches live in this story? If I remember correctly from MTTDS, witches were just humans with magic but live a "normal" life span (unless mated to a demon of course). If he cursed Naz 100 years ago, he was likely a young adult then so he is well over 100 years old himself now, at least 120 to 130 years old maybe. That would be exceedingly old for a human and if he plans to be around to "help" Naz after Ares dies, then how long to witches live?

Jasmine, I am addicted to heart of darkness now. I am reading vol 1 and loving it. How do you create such stories and characters.

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