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Donna_Huddleston
Donna_HuddlestonLv4Donna_Huddleston

if she is going to see the witch Malachi will definitely go with her... he doesn't trust the witch.

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

๐™Ž๐™š๐™š๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™– ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™˜๐™ ๐™ข๐™ž๐™œ๐™๐™ฉ ๐™—๐™š ๐™– ๐™œ๐™ค๐™ค๐™™ ๐™ž๐™™๐™š๐™–, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™„ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐™ˆ๐™–๐™ก๐™–๐™˜๐™๐™ž ๐™จ๐™๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™–๐™˜๐™˜๐™ค๐™ข๐™ฅ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฎ ๐™๐™š๐™ง. ๐™Ž๐™๐™š ๐™จ๐™๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™œ๐™ค ๐™–๐™ก๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™š. ๐™„ ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ซ๐™š ๐™จ๐™š๐™š๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ข ๐™œ๐™š๐™ฉ ๐™˜๐™ก๐™ค๐™จ๐™š๐™ง. ๐™„ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐˜ผ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ ๐™จ๐™š๐™š๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™๐™š๐™ก๐™ฅ ๐™๐™ž๐™ข ๐™œ๐™š๐™ฉ ๐™˜๐™ก๐™ค๐™จ๐™ช๐™ง๐™š. ๐™๐™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™๐™š ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™œ๐™š๐™ฉ ๐™˜๐™ก๐™ค๐™จ๐™š๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™‰๐™–๐™ฏ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™š๐™ฃ. ๐™ƒ๐™š ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™›๐™ž๐™œ๐™๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ž๐™ฉ, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™ช๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™›๐™š๐™š๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™จ ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™—๐™š๐™œ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™œ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ฌ. ๐˜พ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™– ๐™œ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ž๐™š๐™จ๐™ฉ. ๐™ƒ๐™š ๐™™๐™ค๐™š๐™จ๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™ช๐™ฅ๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ง๐™จ. ๐™ƒ๐™š ๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ข๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™–๐™˜๐™๐™š๐™จ ๐™ฅ๐™š๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™š ๐™๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™จ๐™š๐™–๐™ง๐™˜๐™ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ง๐™จ. ๐™ƒ๐™š ๐™ค๐™›๐™›๐™š๐™ง๐™จ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™จ๐™™๐™ค๐™ข ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™–๐™™๐™ซ๐™ž๐™˜๐™š. ๐™ƒ๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ข๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™š๐™จ ๐™™๐™š๐™š๐™ฅ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ. (๐™’๐™š ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™–๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ช๐™จ๐™š ๐™– ๐˜พ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™–๐™ฃ! ๐™‰๐™ค๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™ช๐™ง๐™š ๐™„ ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™ข๐™–๐™ ๐™š ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ช๐™ฅ ๐™–๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™จ๐™š ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™–๐™ž๐™ง๐™จ, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ช๐™œ๐™!!!) ๐™„ ๐™จ๐™š๐™š ๐™จ๐™ค ๐™ข๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฎ ๐™œ๐™ค๐™ค๐™™ ๐™˜๐™๐™–๐™ฅ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง๐™จ ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง ๐™›๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™ช๐™ง๐™š!!! โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

kodash1
kodash1Lv14kodash1

2 chapter ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ I am happy!!!

Elle_Po
Elle_PoLv14Elle_Po

I donโ€™ care what anyone says, Malachi is my boo

FormerPD2020
FormerPD2020Lv15FormerPD2020

Poor Ravina has so much on her plate: finding her sister, gaining acceptance in a new place, a new relationship. I known finding her sister would put a big piece of her heart back together

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

The mirror just showed what Ravina truly desires, it's seeing her sister. And now she misses Corrina more. Glad that Malachi came for Ravina to comfort her. but would it wise to see the witch? thank you for the two chapters,Jazzy๐Ÿ˜

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Soft but sweet moments. Ravania sees her sister as she is today and the tears of built up emotions just flow. Then Malchi the comforter holds Ravania with the care that words can not express! Just holding her and reassuring they will find her sister. The mirror concerns me though and Ravnia seeking out the witch cna not be goodโ€ฆimmensely enjoyed this bonus chapter..Thanks Jaz๐Ÿ’•

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Oh boy, Iโ€™m not excited about Ravina involving a witch. Ares can identify Ephraim; if only they could connect all the dots.

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Great two chapters!!! First Ares going to the temple and talking to the priest and then Ravina seeing her sister in the mirror and Malachi comforting her. I like how the priest is trying to show Ares that he loves Nazneen and how the maid was telling Ravina about her healing after she makes love to Malachi. ๐Ÿ˜‚ push much people ๐Ÿ˜‚

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Jasmine, thank you for the two chapters. I will reread them tomorrow. I hope Ravina will not ask Malachi to find the witch who sold him the mirror. In time, Ravina will be reunited with Corrina. I hope that reunion will take place soon, very soon.

Jesk8
Jesk8Lv15Jesk8

Iโ€™m not sure what seeing the witch, who sold her the mirror, would accomplish except maybe fall into a trap.

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Thank you jasmine for let ravina see that her sis is happy

emillerdc
emillerdcLv15emillerdc

Loved the extra chapter!

gypsy_71121
gypsy_71121Lv15gypsy_71121

uhmmm wonder if Malachi is going to tell her the truth now or is everyone just going to keep it from her? ๐Ÿค”

Zandra_Gonzalez
Zandra_GonzalezLv14Zandra_Gonzalez

Ooooo Thank you so much for the extra chapter!!!!

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

But arie know the guy she is with but h e dont know that he his breedmate is corina

Ruz_Brukiville
Ruz_BrukivilleLv15Ruz_Brukiville

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LowVSdiamond
LowVSdiamondLv14LowVSdiamond

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esablon86
esablon86Lv14esablon86

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Adrijana26
Adrijana26Lv15Adrijana26

Thank you jaz for the 2 chapters! Will definitely re read these chapters.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

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