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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

MyTigger
MyTiggerLv15MyTigger

Not what I expected.

JasmineJosef
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Merry Christmas everyone ❤

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K_Deck
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Yikes Malachi… so much torment here. I’m sad her wounds opened up again. We keep taking steps forward and a few back. It’s good he stopped; once she is healed fully she will be thinking about this encounter again and maybe ready for more.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Ares' (blood) stopping the action. Malachi then stays true to his promise!Well done! Satiate the hunger at a later time😉😏Make it a different kind of special for Ravina🥰 tack Jazzy💕 Merry Christmas all TOF readers😊🎄🎉

FormerPD2020
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I know we all want to see this relationship consummated, but I’m glad they stopped. I think Malachi and Ravina would both want it to be something much more controlled and special and not so impulsive for their first time.

Tina_Roberts_1551
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Kia you need to make it more special for her since it will be her first

P_P_7568
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Wow! This was extremely intense! Malchi you have the moves and Ravania was receptive! If only the wounds on back had not opened up. Malchi showing his passion and realized she was bleeding. Oh they are make more and more steps to bonding💕

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DaoistUByHFr
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dear author will this story continue till malachi and ravina become parents I would love to see their kids

Kathleen_Blessing
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Malachi being possessive. His dragon wants his mate and is jealous of Ares 😂. Poor Ravina's back. When it finally heals and they can take this to the point of no return, Malachi is going to have a hard time being gentle with Ravina especially if she is in her fertile time of month. He will fill her up in no time and won't be able to stop himself until he is fully satisfied as well as her being satisfied.

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Kendall_Michalak
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Thank you for the amazing chapter!!! Cant wait for more like this! 🤣🤤 Merry Christmas!! 🎄🎄🎄

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Eulinda_Ogiste
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Thanks for this chapter, with such diverse emotional feels Jazz 👍👍

Perptal_Charles
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If Nazneen can hear them, she will feel like stabbing Malachi lol😂😂

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