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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Pearl_gem
Pearl_gemLv13Pearl_gem

cant wait to see the day that nazneem will know what is the relationship between her breedmate and the queen

kodash1
kodash1Lv14kodash1

oh Joel I hope yours is a human girl too ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I sense Ares and Nazneen growing closer together. My inquiring mind wants to know when Ares will find out that he will not die anytime in the foreseeable future.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Loved that Ares went along with Nazneen with the dance and enjoyed it. But he still thinks he'd d ie. I wonder if he can't feel in his blood that he wouldn't (now that he's known a bit of his true identity) Loving Naz going with the flow and not being forceful with Ares on certain things. But is she jealous of Ravina? tack Jazzy๐Ÿ˜Š

Zandra_Gonzalez
Zandra_GonzalezLv14Zandra_Gonzalez

Ooooo that last sentence things are really heating up!!

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Oh boyโ€ฆ. How will he handle this one?!

JasmineJosef
JasmineJosefAuthorJasmineJosef

Merry Christmas โค

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

I wonder if Nazneen is putting it all together that Ravina is the one Ares has feelings for. The way Ravina has been watching Ares, I am sure she is wondering. I like the way Ravina put Joel in his place, and at the same time it let Malachi know that she is feeling safe with him. She stuck up for Nazneen and Ares and let Joel and Malachi know her feelings for Malachi.

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Enjoyed having these chapters. I still think Ravania schoole Joel. Malchi just understands Ravania and just let her let Joel have it. Loved how they talk that Ravania. Feels safe woth Malchi not physical but her emotions, that she guarded for so long. That tells me they are move to the next phase of their relationship. I agree Ares need to tell Naz about Ravania. Super chapter

Jesk8
Jesk8Lv15Jesk8

Canโ€™t wait to hear what Ares will say! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

๐™Ž๐™๐™š ๐™™๐™ค๐™š๐™จ, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™ค๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ฎ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™›๐™ž๐™œ๐™ช๐™ง๐™š ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™™๐™ž๐™›๐™›๐™š๐™ง๐™š๐™ฃ๐™ฉ ๐™–๐™—๐™ค๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™๐™ž๐™ข. ๐™„ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐™…๐™ค๐™š๐™ก ๐™๐™–๐™จ ๐™จ๐™ฅ๐™–๐™ง๐™ ๐™š๐™™ ๐™ข๐™ค๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™š๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ. ๐™ˆ๐™–๐™ก๐™–๐™˜๐™๐™ž, ๐™จ๐™ค ๐™›๐™–๐™ง ๐™™๐™ค๐™š๐™จ๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™š๐™š๐™ข๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™–'๐™จ ๐™ง๐™š๐™ก๐™–๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™๐™ž๐™ฅ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐˜ผ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ. ๐˜ผ๐™จ ๐™ˆ๐™–๐™ก๐™–๐™˜๐™๐™ž ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™–'๐™จ ๐™ง๐™š๐™ก๐™–๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™๐™ž๐™ฅ ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ค๐™œ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ๐™จ๐™š๐™จ, ๐˜ผ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™๐™–๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™–'๐™จ ๐™ง๐™š๐™ก๐™–๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™๐™ž๐™ฅ ๐™จ๐™š๐™š๐™ข๐™จ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™ง๐™š๐™œ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ๐™จ. ๐™„ ๐™™๐™ค๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐˜ผ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™œ๐™ค๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™™๐™ž๐™š. ๐Ÿค”โ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ฌโ™ฅ๏ธ

Loveforevertrue33
Loveforevertrue33Lv12Loveforevertrue33

iโ€™v enjoyed the last three chapters. thank you!

Daoist1twLHF
Daoist1twLHFLv14Daoist1twLHF

Shirley_Sarchett
Shirley_SarchettLv15Shirley_Sarchett

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amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

I canโ€™t wait for his response!

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LowVSdiamondLv14LowVSdiamond

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Kemistics_01
Kemistics_01Lv14Kemistics_01

Ah...so Ravina is coming up...I hope Ares adresses it once and for all. I like that Joel is having meaningful conversations with Ravina although it feels like sparring with words. Yikes, Ares still thinks he is dieing.....all in good time for the truth to bevl revealed especially as Malachi's brothers are on his unusual human scent.