Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Poor Ravina… I think she is feeling a bit self conscious to be honest. She genuinely cares for Ares, I mean, she CHOSE him to marry. So that’s not just going to go away even though she has decided to give Malachi a chance. Now she is comfronted with this woman that has made her betrothed kind of forget about her, she saw Milachis brothers reaction to her and now Malachi has admitted to some past with her… This can’t be easy on her as a woman. She feels less than she is. Even though outer beauty is only skin deep and I feel no woman can hold a candle to Ravina.

Bravo! The much needed conversation with Ravania and Malchi….she admits her heart is not as guarded and she has no issues with Malchi’s past…especially with Naz. This was a wonderful chapter! I still can’t wait till Malchi and Ravania make it to the next level of their realtionship! Thanks Jaz!💕

I’m glad they had this conversation. It’s so much better as she will definitely find out eventually. It’s better for her not to be surprised if someone (like Nazneen) drops that bomb later. I suspect Nazneen won’t take it so we’ll when she finds that Ares was set to marry Ravina…. Now THAT might make Naz lose her s—-.

This twisted fate brought all four of them together. And the connection of Ares to Ephraim will add up to that as it leads to seeing Corrina again. Full of surprises it is.😁 tack Jazzy😊

jasmine, im really pleased that you are interested in the characters’ minds and thoughts. It makes them so much more real and interesting. I appreciate your work. 😘🤩

It is clear that Malachi and Ravina are now a couple with a deep emotional bond. I am happy for each of them. Theirr marriage consummation will be a sweet experience for each of them, but especially for Ravina. I expect that their children will be gorgeous.

Malachi better do something to lock this up with Ravina and erase any doubts. Can't wait for Naz to out 2 and 2 together and realize Ares once had a fiance... or maybe still does because they haven't officially called it off? Ha! Ravina got Ares to fall for her... and will Malachai's Queen. Yeah... that'll go over like a lead balloon.

This was a great chapter but come on ravina u guys need to do the deed to have more confidence in eachother lol (or is it just me wanting them to do it already?) 😊

I mean if she felt the sting then she will understand how Malachai feels but even more because they actually have feelings for eachother and he can sense that. Nazneen will probably catch on aswell. Cant wait for more!!

I’m so glad they can communicate, especially after this day!

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Lovely chapter, thank you Jasmine.

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I like their interactions and their understanding of each others views and opinions

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