Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame
Touch of Flame
JasmineJosef
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I feel my heart was gripped by this chapter. So much emotion. Malachi knows what happened was wrong and he wants to do better. While the way it came out was not good, the ending message from Malachi and the protection of her was great. And now Area to help her with her missionā¦ their mission. He has some sort of sea dragon/monster in his lineage. I canāt wait for their paths to cross again. Thanks for the update, Jasmine! š„°
Awesome chapter! omg! Was that the best chapter ever! Malchi standing up to his people as Ravania to be his queen! The people she helped stood up for her! Which seems like a lot! All his brothers stood by Malchi and even Saul spoke up! Then Malchi showing them her scar from the attack! Then ravannia hearing who killed her father but Malchi said he didnt agree with his own father and wanted Peace! All I can say Best Chapter Yet!!!!!!šššš„°
Oh this chapter is amazing ā¤ļø To see Malachi stand up for Ravina against his people and even his brothers defending her also! I was shocked even Saul defended the breedmate bond š„° Poor Ravina has also now learned the truth that she already assumed Malachiās family was responsible for losing her family. And now this dream š± It is going to take an alliance of these three couples to finally bring the peace that they have all been hoping for š¤š¤
This is getting more brilliant in its progressive development between all our significant characters' portrayals; must wait to see when every thing else that's necessary to unfold further. So Ares enters her dreams as her ally in the completion of her mission for the dragon clan and for her people; I hope Malachi can understand the importance of this alliance plus with Ephraim who will come into the picture soon; they all need to be united for this ONE COMMON GOAL to foster PEACE and UNDERSTANDING among their people.
I cringed when he just pulled her out and put her in front of everyone š¬š. Not the best approach but happy he is communicating now and told her he didn't agree with his father. This is a lot for Ravina right now and maybe the tamer mission is what she needs. Did she Ares in his true form? Can't wait to find out what he is and if they are supposed to work together wonder how Malachi will feel about it.
It's great to have you back. I hope you feel better and pray you stay healthy! Thank you for the wonderful chapter. Malachi's family finally standing up for Ravina. It seems even Saul has been won over by her. Then Malachi being honest with Ravina. I think it's good that the truth is out. Ravina is seeing Ares in a new light in her dreams. I still look forward to finding out what Ares really is. I think he maybe part siren or sea witch or sea dragon
Very happy to hear that. I know itās a precarious position for authors with so many anxious readers waiting for updatesā¦then life happens. That will always be the hazard of āliveā books. The good news is, for the most part readers are patient, kind, and understanding. The one thing that makes a difference is when authors take a few minutes to keep the readers informed. That helps us understand and show empathy. Very glad to hear your family emergency is improving. ā„ļøā„ļøā„ļø
I love reading all of the side stories. You can sense how these stories will, eventually culminate a a whole. Each characterās story is an essential piece of the puzzle. If one piece is missing, the story will be incomplete. Ever chapter reveals a tidbit, or at times a major revelation. It is what brings a reader back and excited to learn more! Great chapter! ā„ļøā„ļøā„ļø
