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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

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Jennie_Hendrickson
Jennie_HendricksonLv15Jennie_Hendrickson

Ok, just sitting here shaking after reading this chapter.

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April_Fleming
April_FlemingLv14April_Fleming

In true Jasmine fashion she rewards us with an exchange of love that is directly followed by tragedy šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ I feel emotionally wrecked by these last three chapters. šŸ˜­šŸ˜‚

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Marina_Sch
Marina_SchLv14Marina_Sch

Seriously! This is NOT funny at all! I am so tense! This is literally freaking me out!!!

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K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Iā€™m relieved Malachi and Ravina are safely back home. I hope they heal quickly. Iā€™m also relieved Saul doesnā€™t appear to be on the wrong side of this attack. I hope they can figure out who needs to be reminded now.

E_M_never_sleeps
E_M_never_sleepsLv15E_M_never_sleeps

Oh my heart is pounding so hard. Poor Ravina is so scared of losing everything again. šŸ˜” Even though it put her in more danger Iā€™m so glad that she didnā€™t leave Malachi. That is something that will be very meaningful between the two of them. šŸ„¹ Maybe even Saul will appreciate her trying to help him. But Iā€™m doubtful. He may blame the attacks on her being there and making Malachi look weak to the other clans. I really hope this brings them all closer together as a family to support one another. šŸ˜Š

Vivion1719318
Vivion1719318Lv15Vivion1719318

I have a feeling this horrible indigent will soften Sauls heart towards Ravina, especially since she didnā€™t leave Malachis side. When Malachi wakes up he and Ravina will be closer as well.

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

That was a close call! šŸ˜… I am happy about one thing though. (Other than their amazing first kiss and tgat they are both OK) Malachi got to witness just how much Ravina cares for him. She could have left like he told her to but she wouldnā€™t leave her manā€™s side. And even sheā€™d tears at the thought of him passing.šŸ˜‰šŸ’—āœØ

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

so glad they are both safe. it's obvious now that the white dragons were spying. the kiss M and R shared was a blatant declaration of his intentions. she's not a mere body to carry his offspring , she is his queen, his woman, his love - so they attacked to get rid of her. I hope Ravina understands the situation , his acceptance of her as his breedmate, the reason of the attack and how fearlessly he protected her. I'm hoping she sneaks into his room, into his bed, and holds him tight. then they both rest and heal together.

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Mo_Dee
Mo_DeeLv14Mo_Dee

Ooohh Jasmin, this got me real good

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rebelrose72
rebelrose72Lv15rebelrose72

I hope more is coming today plz?!! I canā€™ wait to find out what happens

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

It's good Malachi and Ravina are bad in their home, but will they heal right? The three large slashes on Ravina's back isn't good. I am glad that she didn't leave Malachi behind and now he will know that she truly loves him and Saul saw for himself. Ravina was trying to help save Malachi even at the risk of her own life. They need to bring Ravina to Malachi's side so they can help each other heal. I am happy Saul wasn't apart of the attack.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Ravinaā€™s and Malachiā€™s rescue was extremely dramatic and occurred just in the nick of time. There is no doubt that Ravina and Malachi love each other. Ravina refused to leave Malachi to save her life and Malachi begged Ravina to leave him so that she would not be killed by the white dragons. Ravina did all she could to prevent Malachi from losing an excessive amount of blood so that he would not die. She does not want to lose someone again whom she loves. In her current state of mind, Ravina would rather die. The love between Malachi and Ravina is real.

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Poor ravina just when they where about to have an intimate momment these happensā€¦ Poor Ravina she is injured both physically and mentall

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

my fear is that Saul might try to capitalize on Ravina's feelings for Malachi and tell her she is the reason for the attacks and if she loves Malachi and wants him not to get hurt or die, then she should leave. "Obviously" a dragon can live without his mate, Saul is the example. So I'm afraid he'll convince her to reject and leave Malachi.

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utopian25
utopian25Lv15utopian25

can we get more please šŸ„ŗ you can't leave us hanging. I very much like the bond the brothers share, hope Saul comes to accept Ravina and be there for his brother.

Nika_L
Nika_LLv15Nika_L

What a rollercoaster this was or still isā€¦šŸ˜³ Let them be ok šŸ™šŸ» Malachi needs to make up his mind. Staying with Ravina or not, although we know what option is the only possible, he needs to do it now. I personally think they would be great ruling couple šŸ¤šŸ’›

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Poor ravina I know she was worried about kia. And she hurt to

moemoe45
moemoe45Lv15moemoe45

I'm glad Aaron was there too. Would they have left Ravina? I hope they do get their revenge on the white dragons and teach them a valuable lesson. But will this change Saul or will he become more bitter toward Ravina? Time will tell. Hopefully not too much time šŸ˜‰

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Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car