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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Cory_3448
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I really enjoy reading this novel. I think it has all the right ingredients to become an fantastic read, a favorite. I find the chapters seem to be shorter with little content. Story is extremely slow. If not for those last 2 I would give it 5 stars.

K_Deck
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I wish for Malachi to grab her and plant a proper kiss in her lips! No more teasing!!!

Marianne33
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I get it Jasmine!! You want us to beg? Fine!!!🤣🤣

DespinaNY
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We need someone to take major action here. 😂 This build up is great but we need one of them to break and jump on the other at this point. I’m ready. 😂😂

SAM_JJFan
SAM_JJFanLv14SAM_JJFan

It seems Jasmine is teasing us as much as Ravina teased Malachi with that pitiful kiss❣️😂

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Thanks for the 2 Extra chapters Jaz! Ravania getting her stallion and naming it Darcy she as so fitting. The 2 racing was for a kiss 💋…I knew Malchi would win just hoping for the passion kiss we’ve been waiting for.. she is having all these feelings and it just would be nice to see that they connect and realize how much they feel for each other! Super chapters💕

Needmorecoffee
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Ooh...I did not expect this chapter. They seem so close now which I love and she seems so comfortable with all the teasing. She even thought of kissing him 😏. Can't wait for more. Thank you for the bonuses. Still can't get enough, especially when they are in this state 😍🥰😍

Tina_Roberts_1551
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I love this chapter jasmine great chapter you alway lease us wanting more

Tina_Roberts_1551
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Please let them kiss

chinawa
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just kiss Ravina,there and then, Malachi!!!😉😏Feel those lips🤩😍 tack Jazzy for the fun and teasing chapters💕

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Jasmine, thank you for the two chapters that were made available to be read today, Saturday, October 2,2022. It’s time for Malachi to give Ravina the kiss that will set her body on fire and blow her mind. The woman needs to experience a kiss from the gorgeous King of Dragons. Then she can sing “This Girl is on Fire”.

Kathleen_Blessing
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I hope it doesn't take much longer before they kiss. She is feeling more and more of the physical feelings. Yes, she is innocent, but she is also human. Malachi knows he has to be gentle and doesn't want to hurt her. I have a feeling their first real kiss will be magical.

Eulinda_Ogiste
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Great progress. They are opening up to each other more and more. Great two chapters Jasmine.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I can hardly wait to find out what Jasmine has in store for Ravina and Malachi.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Because Malachi is so much taller than Ravina, for them to have a proper first, he should literally sweep her off her feet and hold her in his arms.

Marina_Sch
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These two 🙈😂 Just take her, press her against a tree and kiss her like a man! 😁

Hazel_Cat_Eyes
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Can’t wait for todays update!!!

Shirley_Sarchett
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

P_P_7568
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Perptal_Charles
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Jazzy, you owe us a deep kissing scene for Malvina remember😉

Melissa_Hayes73
Melissa_Hayes73Lv15Melissa_Hayes73

She kissed Ares a couple times but that's when she thought she 'had' to marry him. The kiss that her and Malachi will have will be WAY different than that. She feels attracted to Malachi more and more. She's even fantasizing about what his kiss will be like.