Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Omg! Thank you super gifters and Jaz for the bonus chapter! I again was drawn into every word! All I can say is awesome! Ravanna stepping up as always with her gift of healing. Malchi on such a state! I only wished he’d would of told her he was looking for her sister. That would of meant so much to her. She knew he wasn’ t hunting or trying to hurt humans but she doesn’t know what he was trying to do.. maybe in his fever he will mumble what he was trying to do…. Thank you all again!🥹💕💕💕

I hope having her near will speed his healing. She might be his superpower. ❤️

I would love to read Ravinas pov when she is washing Malachis body…. Wonder what she was thinking and feeling

Thank you Jazzy and supergifters! I’m so nervous that the other thing Malachi was shot with was a tracker. 😬🫣😳

I wonder how long before Ephraim and Malachi run into each other. Or was it Ephraim that shot Malachi 🤔. It would be nice if they can help each other and let the sisters get to know each other again. Malachi is lucky to have Ravina by his side and taking care of him. I laughed when she fell into his groin. Poor Malachi is in so much pain. It seems that Ravina and Malachi care way more than either of them will admit at the moment. They seem to be each other's security blanket.

I hope he tells her he went looking for her sister.

I don't think he wants to get her hopes up before he knows for sure, she's experienced way to much loss. But I am sure that fever is going to bring some thoughts forward he's been hiding.

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Thanks Jasmine and super gifters for this chapter. Malachi, hope Ravina sleeping next to you will help ease the pain.

Supergifters and Jasmine, thank you very much for the bonus chapter. I was very much drawn into it. Ravina is doing an excellent job taking care of Malachi’s medical needs. By now Malachi has to know that Ravina cares deeply for him. I believe she loves the man and she needs to admit this truth to herself. After Malachi wakes up feeling better, I hope he kisses her and she kisses him back. This kiss 💋 is well overdue.

Nooo 🤣🤣. I want to know her thoughts when she grabbed him.

I also wish that Malachi had told her. it would have meant alot to her

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