Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

She did better than he expected, and better than I expected! This bodes well for their eventual mating 💕

Intense. Somehow the "strange" parts of herself, like peeling her skin and biting herself has helped her not feel disgusted by this or Malachi's molting.

Thank you for the second chapter! ❤️ I love that Ravina kinda liked it deep down, she seemed completely captivated in the experience.

thank you as always jazz. great chapter. what a bonus for the day! that was definitely a very intense ceremony.

Thank you to the super gifters for your generosity, helping us to get to read the 3rd part. it came at a good time, evening, for me. ☺️ I hope Ravina’s acceptance encourages Malachi to know what is possible, and that it is he to whom she grabs for security. 😌 Great writing!

Agreed, thanks to the super gifters and Jaz for the wonderful chapter! You never disappoint! I was on the edge of my seat as I read each word being drawn in….Ravania holding onto Malchi Just another great jester! Thank you 😊

Amazing, breath-taking and Ravina watching the mating maybe she can see her and Malachi in the mating process. I see he didn't mind her digging her nails in him.

That certainly was intense! 😅

She did much better than i thouhgt she would. 🥺

Supergifters and Jasmine, thank you for the “bonus” chapter. I was as caught up in the mating ceremony as much as Ravina was. I am pleased that Ravina is beginning to depend on Malachi as her source of comfort and protection. I am looking forward to reading how the mating ceremony is carried out when the couple consists of a male dragon a human female breedmate.

Thanks for the bonus chapter!

Thank you for the second chapter! I always look forward to reading more

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Wow this was intense but at one point ravina felt it was something intimate. I guess she got a little hot 😝. By the time ravina and malachai have their ceremony it’l l be a price of cake for Ravina! So I guess instead of pronouncing them as husband and wife and kiss, this how they are pronounced as husband and wife. Loved how ravina was digging her fingers into malachais hand lol he probably got all hot when she tightens her hand on his 😊. But where is Aaron????

What a nice gift of another chapter, thanx. The attachment seems to grow.

These chapter was super intense But I loved it Now ravina knows what awaits her

Ravina did really well and Malachi enjoyed watching her. I think their mating ceremony will be interesting and she will enjoy 😉

Thank you for that fascinating, awesome chapter, dear Jazz. It was getting more intense as it went through the process and Ravina's handled and had taken it well throughout; when it's time for her and Malachi's mating ceremony, I guess she'll be able to get it done and carry it out willingly with him. ♥️🥰 I felt like already watching some kind of movie with the ceremony 🤩 I loved how it was vividly depicted step by step that my eyes also widened watching through the ceremony. 😁

Wow!!! Súper intense chapter. Thank you Jas and thank you gifters! Loved it!

Whew!! I was holding my breath 😅. I knew Ravina would do alright but she contained herself really well. I’m curious how it will be between Malachi and Ravina😏. I’m still wondering about Aaron🤔