Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

The visual descriptions were on point, I need more though! Part 3 later today?! ;)

I love how they are enjoying each other’s company. I wonder if the ceremony will be the same for Malachi & Ravina in the future or will be different since she is human. I also wonder if they will have a separate ceremony other than the mating ceremony to crown her as Queen. Hope there’s some sort of honeymoon or solitude period after. Does the mating ceremony intensify the bond more?…

I hope nothing in the next part triggers her. 😬

so they bite each other too to mate... claws though....I hope only their claws come out....and they don't fully shift. although I'm curious how Ravina would react to be so close to them and in no danger. I'm actually looking forward to Malachi flying her on his back.

I love these chapter I felt that I was sitting in the ceremony… Very well written…

This looks like a calmer version of a Dothraki wedding

Oh this is going to be interesting. Will it bring up bad memories.

Ravina getting nervous watching and still wanting to see the rest. I am curious about how she will react to the bite and claws. Will they change into their full dragon forms for this part?

I’m fascinated about the process too. King M and Ravina are not fighting ;)

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oh my god, you can't leave it there!!!!

I Think Ravina is to fascinated to let the ceremony bother here. She is in her inventor curiosity mode. If the couple does shift, Ravina would have a different perspective of the image of a dragon. Beautiful writing Jazzy!😊

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I don't think it will be that big of a deal if they shift. If I remember correctly she saw the messengers shift and leave and Malachi literally flew with her to his kingdom. She also wondered why Chanan didn't shift to reach the temple so I don't think she is scared of them in that sense unless it is related to terror like when she saved the mother and child.

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No wonder Malachi said Ravina’s touch was a personal claim on him, hmmm!

The interaction with Malchi and Ravania during the cermony was touching. HEr asking questions and Malchi explaining how the ceremony worked. Then Malchi considering her feelings about the biting abs claws. He offered to take her home, considering it might scare her. Ravania is all about learning so she could handle the next step, just the fact Malchi thought it might upset her, that was so thoughtful. Awesome chapter!💕