Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

I think Ravina has enough intellect to see Saul for who he truly is. She will be able to see the genuineness behind Malachis words and actions.

I hope Ravina tells Malachi about her interaction with Saul... but I don’t think she will 😢

I think Ravina's statement to Saul about not even getting started with him is accurate. She will soon break through to him. Malachi shows he cares for Ravina and actions speak louder than words. I am sure Malachi will figure out what happened. Especially since Saul grabbed Ravina's arm. He probably left a big bruise and Malachi should be able to smell Saul's sent. He would know then that the bruise is from Saul. I have a feeling it's only a matter of time before the brothers come to blows, although I hope not and Ravina knocks Saul down a peg or five. 🤣

I agree that she is not naive but it will probably put some doubt in her mind.

Saul had a breedmate, he knows their touch compares to no one else’s. Hopefully she makes that deduction as well and chooses to believe Malachi’s affections are genuine. His actions continue to show nothing but his tenderness and care for her. I want her walls to come down.

Despite Saul’s mean words, I think Malachi’s actions speak for themselves with regards to what Ravina means to him

Saul is just a brat why does he hate ravina so much this what he need to do to him

I hate Saul with a passion…. Poor Ravina the physical and emotional pain she is going thru must be so hard… At Aaron is there to make it easy for her.

That's genuine worry and care for you,Ravina from the one and only Dragon King Malachi!I'm sure she knows it's true!🥰 He'll treasure you the most, you'll see😉😍🥰 tack Jazzy💕

Good thing she's smart and could see through Saul (mostly). Thank goodness for Aaron, nick of time! At least Malachi can see she is in need of support, even if she doesn't want it. Oh man I want to keep binge reading!!!!!

Kis was so sweet taking care of her and was worried about her

Saul is a miserable being who continuously tries to place barriers in the road to Malachi’s and Ravina’s happiness. I understand he lost his wife and child. He has the right to grieve; however, his grief has turned into bitterness. Saul needs an unlimited number of counseling sessions with Chanan, the priest. After Saul becomes whole, he.hopefully will be granted another breedmate. In the meantime, he is his worst enemy.

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Thank you author for your rich writing! We can feel the characters’ emotions. I’m glad Aaron was there to provide some support. I’m interested to see how Kara will respond to him 😉 King M is showing his care and I’m sure Ravina feels it. She continues to feel intense ambivalence. Her head knows Saul is a 💩 head and she can’t help but feel doubt with her lack of experience. This is going to be an interesting journey…

Jasmine, for Sour Grapes Saul, is there another breedmate in his future? Currently, he is a piece of work and I do not mean a masterpiece. The chapter released earlier today is so good that I long for another one. Please release another chapter later today. Please!

Kara is probably a very nice ”young” lady who is waiting to be found by her breedmate. She knows Malachi’s brothers, excluding Aaron, have reputations for “dogging” women. I am thrilled that she has turned them down. Around Ravina, he has demonstrated respect for the breedmate bond/relationship. I doubt Aaron would attempt to play the “get-it-and-go” game with Kara.

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