Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Ravina doesn't seem to totally understand that she's falling for Malachi. Although, now Malachi can see that she is fighting the bond because she is scared to let her feelings happen. She basically admitted that she does care for him, but she feels guilty because they are supposed energies and she is scared because everyone dies or is dying that she gets close to. Poor Ravina. The closer she gets to Malachi the more afraid she is.

I love them as a couple! Everything is always wrong or bad but they look real to my eyes 💞

Ugh; they are so troubled... so much past angst to move on from. I wish she knew he was terrorized by his own last actions and doesn’t want that to repeat again. 💔

Oo Alchohol will make you a blabber mouth.. Will make you say things you would never say sober… Am glad Ravina finally said what was on her mind…. Now every time I smell coffee I will think of Malachi.

I can understand why Malachi wouldn't tell her. He feels guilty and responsible and doesn't just want to be forgiven. I admire him for that. Ravina is in deep confusion that is painful and understandably so. It is not just simple fear of outcome but also the guilt of accepting someone she knows caused terror on her people. She is even questioning her morals. It is really tough because then she would have to disregard all that she knows and believes to be wrong and right. Back to Malachi. I truly think when he starts helping humans he will heal that way. It is nothing he should disregard either. It is people's lives and he has a lot of wrong to right. I am glad they had this conversation. You can see that they are getting comfortable with each other and acting like a couple 💑

Communication is the key in all relationships, they are on the right path. They are a power couple and will find a way :) still love the story and still need more ;)

I love how she open up alittle how she feel

This is the most she’s shared and it’s a big one! I hope he responds at some point and not let this opportunity to connect slip away!

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

She scare to open up her heart she afrid they will leave her

They are so cute togather

ah i love this drunk confession (though not love confession yet but we're getting there). now you better up your game malachi!

Now let's see if he caught on to her basically saying she has feelings for him. How is this going to unfold...anxiously waiting jazzy!

I wonder if she will remember telling him all his the next morning🥴.

NOOOO please don’t stop there!! This is what we have been waiting for. Honest emotions, truths spoken from her confusion. She is conflicted, same as Malachi. She has finally fallen for him as well.

Thank you for a great chapter

Sometimes, the truth is not what you see or hear, or even feel. Sometimes it is hidden amongst those 3 things. Each side see the truth by judging through experience alone….we all do it. That is what makes communicating so important. Only when you can understand each other’s point of view can you make informed decisions and understand the whole situation. They are still drowning in their own memories, but not getting the whole truth. As they say, “The truth will set you free.” They have opened up a little, but still holding much inside. There are more truths to be told….communication…😞♥️♥️

Oh gosh this was a SUPERB chapter!!!!! Finally He sees what she’s thinking, where she’s conflicted…. That she really does kinda dig him…. Gives him some hope, at least hope so!

She opened up and admitted that she started to like him. Wow! And Malachi should listen to her, she will be a great queen

oh Lort! the truth is out the bag 🤔🤔 ok King Malachi she said more than enough to accept your fate.