Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Today’s chapter was beautiful, nothing steamy or too profound but there was depth and growth. I love this space they are in right now, they are turning a corner and their walls seem to be not as high. I am enjoying watching their relationship grow.

It will be hard to help someone with their issues when Malachi’s own issues run so deep. Slowly, Ravina is dealing with her issues and even sharing some of them with him. She is opening up to people in her current environment, made a few friends, and gaining respect from his people…something she rarely did in her own kingdom. She is more ready to help him with his issues that manifest in his nightmares. The best way he can help her is to open up to her, even if it’s a little at a time. I don’t mean the actual facts like, his sister died or he killed his father. I mean his feelings, what he went through, what he feels guilty about, what drove him to kill his father…not just that his father was a horrible king, but the reasons behind his nightmares. It won’t be an overnight process, but over time they need to see the inner workings of each other, who they really are in their private and secluded inside. Great chapter! I feel Ravina is finally learning about herself. The future should be quite interesting! ❤️❤️❤️

Yep, Kai: she wants someone to love her mind and soul, not just a physical connection. Get to work, my friend…

Loving Malachi's realization and change! With that, he'd understand Ravina better. There are so many things to know bout each other and this is a great start for them. Tack Jazzy 😊

Now I can't wait to see how what this new Malachi does. He is already doing things right. Such a good start and she seems to notice something. This chapter made me smile.

It’s the first chapter I think Malachi show his vulnerability. Am happy Ravina was there to help him Thru it.

There you go Malachi, you’re headed on the right track now and finally listening to reason. The physical attraction is already there so just keep on getting to know Ravina, who she really is and maybe something positive will happen. 💕

Malachi has some work to do. I can’t wait to see what he’s capable of when he puts some effort and not just instinct into the relationship with Ravina.

This was a lovely peaceful chapter. No sarcastic banter. The will soon grow on each other slowly but surely.

They both have bad dream now he know how she feels so maybe they can help each other

Jasmine, this chapter is so good, that I long to keep reading and reading. Please release another chapter today. If I must pay to gain access to it, I will happily do so.

I am happy that Ravina’s and Malachi’s relationship is moving in a positive direction. After Ravina’s body heals, I hope Malachi will take her away for a few days, I am happy that Ravina is steadfast about not giving herself to Malachi until she becomes his queen. As a healer and inventor, Ravina would be a much more valuable choice as his queen. Also, Malachi already has feelings for Ravina that have nothing to do with instinct.

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Wow! A wonderful chapter taking in all the different emotions! He wants to know her better! She taking the time to make sure he is taken care of too! He reminded himself she didn’ t brag about helping his people, that is because she has a kind heart who wants to help others! They are getting know each other a little at a time! Loved it!❤️

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Such a sweet chapter☺️. I’m so proud of Malachi and his determination to learn Ravina. I have a feeling he is going to surprise her and sweep her off her feet in time.

What a great chapter! So tender.

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I love this chapter it show there start show each other kindness. Ya started to get to know each other more

I love that she seems to be coming around!!