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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Amanda_Jimerson
Amanda_JimersonLv14Amanda_Jimerson

Sweet Jesus! đŸ”„

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JP_reader20
JP_reader20Lv15JP_reader20

Congratulations on the 100th chapter author, this story keeps me wanting for more! Hope Malachi and Ravina can truly make love soon!

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gypsy_71121
gypsy_71121Lv15gypsy_71121

more please I am dying here. the story is amazing. I love watching them grow together. I not rushing I know you are writing as quickly as you can. Just over here biting my nails waiting for each chapter! 💜

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Kaia234
Kaia234Lv14Kaia234

Malachi is like: “Come here let me show you”

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Will Ravina's dream come true? Ravina's worry is understandable, it's frightening too. I appreciate Malachi though making Ravina calm her nerves, but I wish they'd be happy in love soon. tack Jazzy💕

April_Fleming
April_FlemingLv14April_Fleming

I can’t get enough of them, I love watching them slowly progress in these small moments. Daily chapters still doesn’t seem to feed my addiction lol.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Happy 100th JazzyđŸ„°đŸŽ‰

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Poor Ravina her heart is split between the man she thinks she loves and the man she thinks she has to be with
.. Making love

Penny_L
Penny_LLv14Penny_L

You sure know how to make a girl blush, Malachi! I can’t wait until the attraction becomes so strong, they can’t help themselves.

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

Oh, man! I wish I could get excited but I personally believe to make love you have to be in love. Otherwise it's just...s3+. And I trust that they'll get there but I don't think they are there yet although I suspect he has feelings for her already. Not sure what to believe about Ravina

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ACSCS
ACSCSLv14ACSCS

Oh. Well then.

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

My openinf screen just now, and I squealed with joy!!! đŸ”„â€ïž

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Ravania has a fear to overcome. Mal ichi is being so gentle and supportive of her. I think her dream is a look into the future but she is already bonded with Malichi at this point. SJr is confused with what love is and what it should be. In the end Malchi said the most hear warming thing don’ t think of it as breeding but love making! I think Malchi has come to realize his true feelings for her. Now it’s her turn! Love all these chapters! congratulations 100!!! 💕💕💕

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Um
. is this another dream?!?!?

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Malachi trying to calm the fares of his innocent breedmate. She is terrified of making babies and loosing her virtue. I am not sure, but I think she is more afraid to feel the emotions of being intimate and becoming pregnant than the actual act itself. It's really sweet how Malachi is trying to please Ravina and get her to fall for him. I give him credit, because he is really trying.

kt_cali
kt_caliLv14kt_cali

Malachi using the L word😏. I wonder if he understands what that means to humans. This convo should be interesting🍿

CindyPez
CindyPezLv15CindyPez

I think Malachi is loving the moments he gets to spend with Ravina. I think he’s running out of patience but Ravina made it clear. She’ll only give herself if he makes her queen.

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Nika_L
Nika_LLv15Nika_L

100 🎆 What a beautiful chapter đŸ–€

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DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

I say
. Let’s make love to make love happen. đŸ˜đŸ€­đŸ˜œ Just a thought
😉 Happy 100th Chapter Jasmine!!!!!! 💗✹

MyTigger
MyTiggerLv15MyTigger

He is going to get her to feel other things!

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P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza