Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Knock knock… Who’s there?? Not Ravina or Malachi cause They are NAKED lol I can just picture Ravinas face as RED as a Tomato

I am enjoying the thawing between them. I’m hoping she can get comfortable asking him to help her with things. anything! Even just getting paper and a pen for her! I’m also excited to think of her using her inventing mind to make useful tools, rather than devices to harm other races. Dream up that veggie peeler, Ravina; I couldn’t live without mine! 🤣

Malachi should've put a note🤭😂🤣 I kid😆 or Kai could just open the door and show Ravina's injured (but that means less time with her too,since Zoila may step in,lol-if that's her on the door) And I feel he really wants to take care of her and have some calmness(which he gets to enjoy with Ravina even if they banter🤭😂)loving the progress🥰 thank you jazzy🥰

I am hAppy to see Princess Ravina and King Malachi are making good progress in understanding and trying to understand each other. They seemed to appreciate each other more and more. Very interesting characters. Thank you author and the gift gifter for the bonus chapter 🥰👍

Whoever's in the door, let the king and his queen have their own moment please.

Two wonderful chapters! Thanks to the bonus gifter that made it possible! Ravania allowing Malchi to tend to her Injuries it was a sweet but funny too when she realized Aaron was right! They had gentle conversations and her talking about her father and him complimenting him was a soft but bitter moment. Who was at the door? It made me laugh when Malchi said we can’ t answer it if we are naked! Which Ravania was wanted to yell Hey, come on in! Yet she didn’t say anyhing and played along. Oh how I could just keep reading chapter after chapter! I can just see what is happening like As I read each word! Jaz you did a wonderful job on these chapters! 💕

LOVE this chapter! Oh my goodness these two right now are just ❤️❤️❤️

Aww, I love this chapter. Their interactions are increasing.

Thank you Onix Rain!!! Great chapter Jasmine! The back and forth and malachai’s playfulness keeps me smiling throughout the chapter!!

I wonder who is at the door I see kia don’t wan to know who it was he having some alone time with ravina

Jasmine, thank you for the two wonderful chapters. I enjoyed the humor immensely.

Awe Malachai ❤️👏 he’s trying so hard right now and I love it

Go Away, you noisome pestilence. We are a bit compromised at the moment. 🍅 🍅 😳 that’s Ravina’s face right now 😂😂😂😂

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I just love it what Malachi is doing on Ravina and what he wants Ravina to do like at the end of this chapter. We can always wait for the better changes that could go on between them. 💙💓💙

I happy to No that kia will take care of her if she was hurt. Like she is now. I can tell she is falling for her

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Thanks ever so much Onix-Rain for gifting us this bonus chapter. Thanks Jasmine for this wonderful humorous chapter.

It think it has to be one of three people at the door and Malachi doesn't want to ruin their alone time together. Such special moments. Don't interrupt them. I love how Malachi is taking care of Ravina and they are talking small talk. I have a feeling Malachi is not going to let Ravina out of his sight at least for next day. He will stay close to her and take good care of her ❤