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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

real24
real24Lv12real24

AaronšŸ¤£šŸ¤£

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chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Aaron is the best brother in law Ravina would have!So love how he shows concern for Ravina and Kai's relationship,helping them progress in a way. And he wanted Ravina to be Queen for Malachi!šŸ„°šŸ„° Ravina biting Malachi is hilariousšŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚Mad Malachi,let's see what he'll do nextšŸ˜ tack Jazzy!!!

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Fabs_0693
Fabs_0693Lv13Fabs_0693

WE NEED MORE!!!

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Oh my, Aaron has sparked a bit of a flameā€¦ what will happen next?! I hope she plays the damsel in distressā€¦ I canā€™t wait to see the pride shine in Malachiā€™s eyes as he protects her from that pesky spider! Maybe stay away from Malachi for a bit though Aaronā€¦ I donā€™t want your sweet self getting in a fight!

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Kaia234
Kaia234Lv14Kaia234

More please!!!!

Kendall_Michalak
Kendall_MichalakLv15Kendall_Michalak

Oh my šŸ¤£šŸ¤£ Aaron is seriously the best for stirring this kind of trouble and feeling in Malachai

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hanom
hanomLv14hanom

I just hope Aaron will not fall in love with her also. it will be so ugly let him be her friend only please author I hate love triangle especially brothers.

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EjHip
EjHipLv15EjHip

I'm just loving this novel!

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Aaron is now my FAVORITE brotherā€¦ Ravina the damsel in distress these will be funā€¦ I guess ravina finally mark Malachi she bit himā€¦. I can wait to see Ravina call him so many times for his help.

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

I donā€™t knowā€¦ I love Aaronā€™s intentions with this but while it would be entertaining to watch Malachi protect Ravina from a spider šŸ˜‚ I think she should just continue being herself because that is what has won everyone over INCLUDING Malachi. The fact that sheā€™s not that damsel in distress. The fact that sheā€™s so strong, intelligent, down to earth, graceful, HUMBLE, Beautiful etc She is just the epitome of a proper Queen & mate for Malachi. I think he just doesnā€™t know how to go about captivating her heart because heā€™s never had to try with anyone in the past and if she was a dragon she would just feel the bond more. If Malachi actually put forth an effort to make her fall for him instead of entertaining a woman he has 0 interest in, then that would also help her sense the connection between them more even though she is human.

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MyTigger
MyTiggerLv15MyTigger

Oh my! We need more PLEASE!!

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Jasmine, I thoroughly enjoyed the humor in this chapter. If possible, please release another chapter this evening. Please!

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

Oh, I love Aaron šŸ˜šŸ¤£šŸ¤£. I think what he is trying to do with his advice is to make her more comfortable to ask for help and be vulnerable. That it is ok to not be strong all the time and ask for help or complain if she wants to. His intentions are good. Now we know she doesn't feel comfortable with that. She might try it out of curiosity because of who she is but I don't think she will try it with a spider šŸ¤£šŸ¤£. She might do it in a way that is more her?? I don't know at this point

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ„° That was great! Aaron is trying to make his brother jealous so Malachi will do the right thing. I laughed so hard at the end of this chapter šŸ¤£ šŸ˜‚. Aaron is giving her good advice and I can't hardly wait for her to try it. She is to innocent and ignorant to know how to get a man to do just what she wants. Malachi definitely has a possessive side.

Carolyn_V_Singer
Carolyn_V_SingerLv14Carolyn_V_Singer

The big bad king is jealous! I'm happy to see Aaron helping Ravina get to Malachi. let's see if she follows Aaron suggestion about calling Malachi 5 times to see run to her. I think Aaron is causing mischief and she thinks that's funny.

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Sam100_100
Sam100_100Lv15Sam100_100

Fantastic !!

Chandra_Ranell
Chandra_RanellLv14Chandra_Ranell

Oh dear author, how I love your mind. The comedy is grand! My inner chaphead is jonesinā€™ READERS WE NEED TO SPAM Jasmine WITH GIFTS SO SHEā€™LL RELEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!! I almost canā€™t stand the waitā€¦ Iā€™m certain Iā€™m not the only one!!!

Penny_L
Penny_LLv14Penny_L

I laughed so hard at this scene of Ravina butting Malachi and him throwing her on his shoulder.

amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

Love this chapter ā¤ļø Aaron and his anticsā€¦

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Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

Jasmine, you are doing fantastic work here. Every chapter is an adventure . Can't wait for more!

Brandi_Beller
Brandi_BellerLv13Brandi_Beller

Ha ha ha, funny. I just love that last exchange. Good stuff.