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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Iris_Nu_Dinh
Iris_Nu_DinhLv14Iris_Nu_Dinh

Love it when Ravina is assertive, saying what she wants and Malachi is having a clear mind and following his heart šŸ‘šŸ‘

Vivion1719318
Vivion1719318Lv15Vivion1719318

Heā€™s starting to figure out how to reach the strings on Ravinas heart. Little by little he will tangle himself into it.

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

I think he is beginning to like her beyond the instinct and he is also learning about her, how guarded she is, that she panics, and he did remember that she doesn't like socialising. He is seeing the broken woman behind the tough one and he is seeing her more gentle side where she agreed to stay with him the night and even the morning if he needed to.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

I think the mountain overnight trip gave Malachi a clear head on things and his choice of Queen. (and you all know it whošŸ˜) Saul and Zoila wouldn't be happy bout thisšŸ˜… Glad Ravina liked the tattoo, she should flaunt itšŸ˜For everyone to see Malachi's work.šŸ˜ So if it's personalized liked that as compared to the tribal tattoos,it should mean something to his clan right? tack JazzyšŸ„°

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Malachi the doctor taking care of Ravinaā€¦ I think I feel dizzy and am Starting to get a headache.

April_Fleming
April_FlemingLv14April_Fleming

I ship Malachi and Ravina so hard!

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

I have always loved Ravinaā€™s assertiveness but was worried lately she would accept being a mistress. Glad she put it out there and was clear about her position letting him know he can't have his cake and eat it too. She is worth more than that and I think he is beginning to learn that

Hazel_Cat_Eyes
Hazel_Cat_EyesLv15Hazel_Cat_Eyes

Please Jazzy donā€™t leave us hanging! Malachiā€™s got to start rowing the loveboat or something! šŸ˜˜

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

So will he plan to do that? make her his queen? Will Zoila walk away (fly away!) or will he reject her?

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Ahhhh! That was the best chapter yet! Loved the end when she said I wow t give myself to you I until I am your Queen! Oh my! Then Malchi acknowledging it. I just canā€™ t express how this chapter made my heart flutter too! loved loved loved this chapteršŸ„°

Addicted2Fantasy23
Addicted2Fantasy23Lv15Addicted2Fantasy23

and it builds and builds and builds...but eventually, they will either explode or implode,lol, I hope that Ravina starts to acknowledge her true feelings for what they actually are! she is new such things, for the most part, and Malachi needs to help her to see and feel what is happening to her mind and body in reaction to him!!! I myself am hoping for them to explode! with passion of course;)

jirusama
jirusamaLv13jirusama

Malachi is obviously going to choose his breeate. Saul should stop whatever idea he has and support his brother. Gawd, I am so excited for the dragon king and dragon tamer reign.

CindyPez
CindyPezLv15CindyPez

This sounds like an ultimatum to me. Ravina?? Are you letting Malachi know that he has a chance šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜‰??

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

The little green monster visited Ravina as she was sitting at the breakfast table.

AndiLovesJuju2009
AndiLovesJuju2009Lv14AndiLovesJuju2009

FINALLY!!!! Some genuine understanding between those two

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Yes they needed the mountain trip it help them get closer and the tattoo is so sweet

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Mah knows and wants what is best for Malachi and Ravina. I like his mother's knowing smile šŸ˜ƒ. Mah sees and knows all. I wonder if Malachi asked her to stay a few days for Saul's sake, hoping. Don't know what it says on this picture, but this is how I imagine mah's knowing smile is.

M_vick99
M_vick99Lv13M_vick99

So he made he's decision. Time to get rid of Zoila.

Penny_L
Penny_LLv14Penny_L

Both their walls keep breaking down! More please!