Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Love that Ravina is going with the flow here and maybe in a way understanding what Malachi's like. Love that she's letting him think without expecting anything. And Malachi was a gentleman here , so plus points for him🤭🥰 I wonder how people reactea when they see that both have spent the night and were together. What decision will Malachi have? tack Jazzy, 💕

Oh I can’t wait for everyone’s faces when they see them riding up together after their “night alone” Eat that Zoila!

I believe Malachi is falling in love with her. Ravina is slowly falling for him and I hope he rejects the princess Zoila and sends her home.

Zoila right now……

Great amicable morning between them. I hope he has made a decision to reject Zoila and the rest of the competition! We will find out soon! ❤️😬❤️

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. It is a tasty appetizer. Now my heart ♥️ and mind hunger for another chapter.

I can’t get enough of their progress, I love this version of him. I hope it lasts.

Sooooo, they both physically want each other🤭. It is going to be interesting when Ravina really starts yearning for him😆.

I can understand her position and I must say she is calmer than I expected, considering how she keeps her emotions guarded and her walls up. Malachi is lucky she is like this despite what he is allowing to go on. Let's see what he does about Zoila but it won't help Ravina in feeling less bad about wanting him if he is being indecisive. Hopefully this helps him make a decision. Happy they are having these moments. The good sleep must also be adding to her better mood.

Wow so much EMOTION in these chapters for both of them. Am glad they have each other to cope with their pains and sorrows. It will make it easier for both.

I think sitting in the fron with his arms around her would be harder than him sitting in front of her. At least from the back she can control the level of contact. I’m good with Malachi being in control of the level of contact thiugh 👍

I thought he was gonna tell her why he killed his father….. then maybe she’d REALLY change her mind about him…

I cant wait for the next chapter I am still wondering what the tattoo is? 🤔 perhaps a 🐉 perhaps a queens crown 👑 or the clans symbol 🤷🏻‍♀️ On another note I am so proud of the progress they are both making despite the circumstances I truly hope Kai chooses from the heart ♥️ and he ignores the pressure bestowed upon him for being king 🤴

What a break through 🤩🥰. Finally a peaceful evening and morning. This should spell it for Malachi that Ravina will support him if she’s queen. She was willing to stay there longer, starving herself until he was ready to go back. I can’r wait to see what’ next😁. Im loving this😍

It is sweet of Malachi to think about Ravina’s need nourishment, She does need to focus on putting on a few pounds.

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

Progress in understanding each other a little more and treating each other better. If she didn't feel guilty because of her people and Ares, I think she would have let Malachi hold her and possibly more. They both seem to be feeling the pull toward each other.

I guess she lies his arms arround her.

Good Morning indeed 😍 🌞 They are getting along so well. I hope it lasts… Do the right thing Milachi, make Ravina your Queen.

Zoila will not like the answer.