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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Twala_Roan
Twala_RoanLv15Twala_Roan

I think Malachi's clan will stand behind Ravina and stand against Saul and other clans if Malachi takes another queen[img=recommend]

Kiki_Yene
Kiki_YeneLv14Kiki_Yene

come on jasmine, do not do this to us, we need more.

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

I think the best thing Ravina can do is go ahead and enjoy the party with his new friends and with Aaron and just ignore Zoila and Malachi for a moment. Just forget about everything and enjoy herself. That would leave Saul disappointed, would not give any satisfaction to Zoila and would totally catch Malachi's eye. I'm sure the only reason he's watching Zoila's dance is out of obligation. She's the princess of the Rex clan and she's there for him and his under his entire clans scrutiny right now. But I'm sure he's acutely aware of where Ravina is. He'll glance her way when the moment is right and I hope his jaw drops when he finds her dancing with her dragon friends.

Paschalinelily
PaschalinelilyLv14Paschalinelily

I can't wait for the next chapter... this is the boiling point, I hope... ❤️❤️❤️

Marina_Sch
Marina_SchLv14Marina_Sch

I enjoyed this chapter so much, I didn‘t even see the end comming, it hit me straight in my face 😂😂 what a heartwarming and lovely chapter. I knew should would win the people with time ♥️

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

I think it says a lot about Ravina that she already has won this many people over in a short amount of time. I hope Malachi has the opportunity to see that. I have 0 desire to see Malachi with a different queen and Ravina as his breedmate on the side. I think that is disgusting and disgraceful to their bond as breedmates. She deserves better than that. I am completely aware of the consequences and complications of the situation but I think Ravina is worth it. I think the clan will come to love her with time because she truly is a good person AND has outstanding qualities for leadership. She was born to lead. They could actually benefit greatly from having such a Queen. Also, is Malachi going to be intimate with 2 women at the same time? Ravina won’t be with a man who is sleeping with someone else. She doesn’t have it in her to be “the other woman.”

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

I saw 16 coins for the chapter and was soooo happy for a long chapter! But I still ripped through it too fast 😢 Ravina: do your best—have fun with Georgia, Brenna and Kayla. You will shine no matter what! 💜

_Sky_Storm_
_Sky_Storm_Lv15_Sky_Storm_

I am NOT addicted to this story *twitch* I can stop any time I want to *twitch* (Who am I kidding... )

esmerlopez23
esmerlopez23Lv14esmerlopez23

When i got to the end of the chpt

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I do not appreciate Zoila’s dancing provocatively to try to entice Malachi. I do not like it one bit. What is going to Ravina’s next move? Only Jasmine, the master of cliffhangers knows.

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Ravina understands about the political part of the hierarchy. She will bide her time at the party and not let Saul get to her after talking with her friends. I still think it's only a matter of time before Saul tries something to really hurt Ravina if he can't get to her by verbally trying to hurt her. I can also see her making Malachi jealous by dancing with his brother. I am sure something will happen to make Malachi snap.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

By being herself, Ravina has won the support of more of Malachi’s closest relatives. Good for her! I do wonder what Malachi was thinking as he watched Zoila dance. Was he sneaking a peek at Ravina and thinking about what happened earlier that day and what they will do after the party. I wasn’t prepared for this chapter to end when it did. I needed it to have been at least four more paragraphs longer. How am I going to be able to make it until the release of the next chapter? How?

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

As I felt good would come out about Ravania! She has the higher title, breedmate and more influence. Coak on that Saul! Sorry had to say it! Ravania gaining more friends. Glad to see them talk of the good! The party isn’t over and I still can see Aaron pulling Raven in and dance and wait for it….Malchi is going to loose it! Thanks for the surprise chapter! 💕💕

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Jasmine on we want and now we have to wait

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Am so happy Ravina has people on her corner. She won’ t feel as lonely anymore. Am that description of Malachi was 🤩 WOW I felt that I was watching him too.

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

please Jasmine, early update tomorrow?! I live on the pacific coast in the US. there was a time when you used to update in such manner that the new chapter was up before I'd wake up at 7am. Best mornings ever. starting my day with a cup of Kai and Vina. that being said, I'm grateful for new daily chapters no matter what time of day you upload. thank you for your beautiful work. I'm forever in love

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Let's have Ravina perform now😊If not dance,I'm sure there's another skill that the aking and his people will be captivated at💕Maybe she can sing (in a dance party-so what?!) I love that Georgia,Dias,Brenna and co. have taken their liking to Ravina (without Ravina persuading them)its all about the character she showed to them that made them adore her🥰 We're rooting for you,Ravina🥰 tack Jazzy💕

shelia_payne
shelia_payneLv15shelia_payne

OH, COME ONNNNN, JASMINE!

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

O no it didn’t end there now we have to wait

kt_cali
kt_caliLv14kt_cali

This chapter gave me the feels seeing the clan warm up Ravina. The best thing to do is enjoy the party and dance with Aaron😏. I bet that stirs things up🤭.

jirusama
jirusamaLv13jirusama

I love this little group of friends Ravina collected unintentionally. It seems that there will be a war with other dragon clans really. I hope them and Malachi's family stick with them till the end.