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Teresa_Gilbert_3969
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See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

K_Deck
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This conversation is fascinating. I did wonder if Malachi telling Aaron to stay away from her, after Aaron said she wasn’t a bad person if Malachi would just to get to know her better, was Malachi defending his territory moreso than being worried that Aaron would be turned to sympathize with Ravina. He doesn’t want men spending time with her. And I wonder what he will think of these two off riding horses together… will Malachi offer to go riding with her? Will she tell Malachi that he knows about Amal? Will that change her view of him and what he has been through? I can’t wait to learn the answers to this and more!

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

I’d love to see Malachi all jealous and possessive again. It was hot!

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Am glad they have each other to talk. These will make them both feel better. And as a bonus Malachi will be jealous and mad.

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

I would love to see kia get jealous some it would be fun to watch

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

I glad Aaron has ravina to talk to he need a friend I hope he finds his breedmate to it would be funny if he fall for her sister that just a thought

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Loving Ravina and Aaron's bond/connection they've built even in a short period of time.Glad they have each other to rely to (especially bfor Ravina who's not from the dragon lands) but don't get too jealous Malachi🤭 But then it's something I'd like to see too😂 (just don't hurt Aaron) tack Jazzy💕

Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

Aaron and Ravina friendship is good for both health and well being.

moemoe45
moemoe45Lv15moemoe45

I love the friendship they are forming.

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Finally so answers for Raviana and now she is aware of how the breedmate affects their desires. They’ desire no other, I felt that told more about the bond. Especially loved that she was talking to Aaron and learned of Amal. They are all learning about each others pain and hopefully heal. I would love to see how Malachi takes Aaron and Ravania out riding and being alone. A littl jealousy won’ hurt! Loved the chapter! 💕

M_vick99
M_vick99Lv13M_vick99

Love their friendship! So good.

Kendall_Michalak
Kendall_MichalakLv15Kendall_Michalak

I totally love that they are becoming close and making friends with eachother ❤️❤️ they both need that person in their lives 😭❤️

Gojo_mochi
Gojo_mochiLv11Gojo_mochi

Waiting for Ares to show up tho thats when the real drama starts 😭

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Starlet_Johnson
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

sem20str
sem20strLv15sem20str

You know for someone who feels triuble being around people, when she gets some time one on one with people and feels connected with them she is so witty and smart and fun to be with. This budding friendship could be a cornerstone of the bridge that builds between Ravina and not only Malachi but the rest of his family and perhaps one day the rest of their people. Of course there still are those pesky humans. One day at a time.

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

But, what led to her suicide? Is it possible the story has been tainted to be against the humans? How were the inventions used? I just feel there is something we are yet to learn about Amal’s situation leading up to her suicide…and was it suicide? 🤔

Somie98
Somie98Lv13Somie98

Gosh!!! I love this guy Aaron....he really is a cheerful guy and a very gud friend😍😍😍he may be a silent type but he is very sensible and a gud conversationist

amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

I love this chapter! I appreciate the development of another friendship and a break from all the turmoil. Thank you author ❤️

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Rae_Rae31
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See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

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Hollygolightly
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule