Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Boy, we tell Ravina all the time to open her mind but honestly it is a two way street. Malachi needs some waking up as well. I understand he changed his mind when his sister got hurt but how many people did he hurt before that, even if it was under his father's influence. He needs to make changes as well and I am glad Aaron spoke up. He can't continue with his old ways because he failed once and think no harm will reach him again. War will cause loss on both sides

Malachi and Ravina would have to work it within themselves first for change to come. They were once believers of peace. Deep within them, they still want that. So it's possible to have that. If they let go of the hate ( I'm saying not forgetting the past -its part of them but moving on and hope that there'd be better days to come)

Malachi has a twisted and tormented past too. If only he and Ravina could see that in each other.

Malachai, deep down you and Ravina are both peacemakers. You seek to bring both Kingdoms together, a tough task but achievable.

it was a very good chapter. I After I read this chapter, I closed my eyes and thought about peace. i prayed for our peace. Praying the Lord’ s presence and peace in our world. Ravina and Malachi are struggling with truth and solutions… If it were only simple, Do you think our prayers help when we pray for enlightenment for the world’s people in power? It cant hurt. As the soldier said, “I believe, Lord help my disbelief!” As with us, Ravina and Malachi need a miracle to become unglued! Jazz can fix them! The creator can make things happen! I am soo looking forward that!!! and reading it!!!!!😂😍

This really is a great story. So much pain and suffering and so much room to grow all the way around. It is strange that she is sleeping there Malachi - she thinks so too. Let’s see what you uncover??

The King came to find his breedmate 😂😂

What a story..... I'm just happy that Aaron is speaking up and trust me, that guy has got some sense upstairs..... I hope this is the beginning of some change.... [img=recommend]

The chapters are getting deeper. Our leads are so tormented 😫

I love how Aaron talked some sense into him.

wow bravo Ravina Aaron can now stand up and speak for himself 😅

She's definitely going to know that this sleeping is the kind she hadn't had in a long time perhaps before she lost everything.

Aaron is Malachi's gentle push to be reasonable; Charan is Ravina's! Let the healing begin💝💝💝

Go Aaron! Help your brothers open their eyes

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They are not so different after all😏😏they both need to forgive each other and find a way for each civilization to live in peace🙄🙄🙄

I pity Malachi, he seems to be a peaceful man but past situations have changed him a lot. i could only wish that Ravina will restore balance and peace to them and also unite their two worlds.

proud of Aaron...awwn

Beautifully said by so many fellows readers. they need to focus on making a difference or we just repeat history. 🙏🙏❤️‍🩹🙏🥰