Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Oh Jasmine!!! What a chapter!!!. I have a question. You say “ Your gift is the motivation for my creation. Give me more motivation!” I am sending you a gift of motivation for your wonderful creation. Can we get another chapter please

Like it or not, Malachi’s instinct took over. He could not resist comforting Ravina. He can have all the hardcore conversations with himself that he wants to; but he will never get rid of Ravina.

Small dent in the wall of hers. Sooner or later she’ll start to care for him and I think her sister is living happily without her human family.

Awe…. Kai…. You big marshmallow. 😍😍😍

Poor Ravina! I am glad to see Malachi stepping up to care for her a little now. I think he may start to understand that she suppresses her emotions because she has seen to much pain the same as he has. I think Mah knows the only way that they will get through this is for them to be together and work through it with each other. For the first time in a long time she is getting what she needs.

Oh. My. GOD!!!! Jasmine!!! How do you do this??? This chapter is so awesome!! Thanks a lot, sweetheart. Massive love💖💖💖

Well we knew it wasn’t going to last long. These repressed feelings are destroying them both …. I hate you , I love you.

Oh please don’t make us wait till tomorrow….😩

See this! I just gifted the story: Spacecraft

Ughhhhhhhh!!!!! this chapter was so good I will have to peel the skin around my nails like Vina to cope with the anxiety of having to wait for another chpt until tommorrow

He is comforting her in her time Of need. She is just to stubborn to let herself be love and comforted.

I'm sure her sister is happy somewhere.

These two both have so much trauma to unpack 😭😭😭

You can’t stop there 😭

Maybe this will be a start where they start careing a little for each other

Aww, heartwarming ❤️

It’s time for y’all to have heart to heart talks! Open up and be honest with one another! Get down to the hard core truths and allow the anger and pain to be released! Then you can heal together and help both your kingdoms do the same! Another wonderful chapter Jaz! My heart melted a little!

Truly awesome. I couldn’t be more impressed

Oh this got me for some reason. I’m sitting here with tears in my eyes!

Let Malachi comfort you, Ravina!🥰 it's gonna be alright💕 tack Jazzy😊