Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

I truly think they were chosen to be Mates to break this cycle of hatered and revenge. Looks like his mother is a good woman. Hope she helps them all see the light.

I am a little nervous that Ravina will use Araminta’s kindness against her to hurt Malachi. 😬 I do not want Araminta to be hurt; she seems like a sweet lady.

i'm curious about Araminta. She lost so many people to humans but it feels like she blames her husband most.🤔 i wonder how she'll approach her. Ravina lost her mom and everyone else hates her here so it'll be good if they become close and she can trust her at least.

It's good to see the Malachi's mom can read Ravina like a book. I hope she can get Ravina to open up for her and she can also shed some light about Malachi and their family. I feel like Malachi's mom will play a big factor in bringing Malachi and Ravina.

Araminta is the first person in Malachi’s kingdom to show kindness towards Ravina. I am certain Ravina will never forget this fact.

I know that we are building the story but I want to see Ravania and Malachi Interact in his world. Malachi mother will have some impact on Ravania merely because she shows compassion. Malachis brothers well they will take a lot more work. I would like Ravania to experience and feel softer moments. Then Malichi sharing his past with Ravania, they both have tragedies if they share them, they may find the bond they should be experiencing! 💔

I am happy that Araminta and Aaron will be kind to Ravina. Thankfully, Araminta is nothing like her deceased husband. Aaron’s father did not live long enough to indoctrinate him with cruelty toward humans. I hope Araminta and Ravina will develop a strong and loving relationship. Ravina still needs mothering and I know Araminta would like to see Malachi and Ravina together in a mutually satisfying relationship.

How kind! Finally someone who shows grace, love and mercy! Sounds like Araminta was completely opposite to Khaos. I really hope she and Ravina bond for real. Ravina will have to break down some major walls though. Seems like both Ravina and Araminta have wittiness in common!

Thank you for sharing the mother’s perspective. This will indeed be an interesting meeting and relationship. So much trauma embedded in all of them.

I hope his mother can ease some of the hatred and pain they feel for one another

Meeting the in-laws for the first time is always nerve wrecking…

Jasmine , this is getting better by the chapter. You are a goddess of storytelling!!! PS: can anyone explain to me how the "pen summoning" works? I'm not sure I understand what it represents or what it serves for. thanks in advance

I think when Ravina finds out the truth about her father really being alive and that ares knew and did not tell her she is going to feel betrayed by them and that is when her feelings towards malichi will change and she will truly give him a chance

Araminta is such a sweet mother. She has lost a daughter and a grandchild but yet she's not hateful to Ravina. I'm hoping that they can be friends. She could see Ravina as a bonus daughter and she could see Araminta as a mother figure. Ravina needs a woman she can talk to and get some loving tenderness from. Her and her aunt hate each other so she's missing that closeness with a female since her mother was killed. Please don't let Ravina be hateful to her after she's being so nice to her. She needs someone on her side in this dragon world.

Gosh, Araminta - what a heavy heart she must have, so see so much unnecessary loss of life and heartache As a mom I can’t imagine. To see hope when Malachi tossed his dad to the ultimate hearbreak of the failure of her daughters breedmate and her sins loss of mate and child. And yet she still has hope and wants to make things right. I see Ravina forming a bond with her as she has such a hole left by the loss of her mother and sister - but at the same time she could really hurt both Malachi and Araminta.

Maybe Araminta will learn about Ravina’s sister and find her as a way to convince Ravina to stay with the dragons and fall for Malachi

I hope Araminta's kindness softens Ravina's cold heart🙏🙏 And Mah be the way to make her change her view of Malachi. Mah must have a plan to get them closer together (slowly but surely) And I hope Mah's kindness be reminded of Ravina's mother. I bet she misses her mom too. As for Malachi, what caused the slow healing? the drugs injected to him? them taking too much blood on him? what if this slow healing is like a delayed reaction of being much stronger later on? Or can Ravina make a cure out of it? Or it's her personal touch that heals him? thanks for th chapter Jazzy💕

Oooohhhh get it done Araminta!

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