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Cutie_Kash06
Cutie_Kash06Lv4Cutie_Kash06

Now is the beginning. Thanks Jasmine šŸ’žšŸ’ž

JasmineJosef
JasmineJosefAuthorJasmineJosef

We are finally here! Thank you for staying till now. We made it through the first heartwrenching part. I know it was tough but can't promise it will be easier now. A gentle reminder, and to those who didn't read the info chapter (please do). This is a dark romance, a revenge story of enemies to lovers. Our leads are damaged and full of hatred, so this is no healthy display of relationship with oneself or the other, and I don't intend to display this hatred and enemies to lovers lightly. No flowers and rainbows for a good while. Hope you can still enjoy it and see our characters growā¤ļø Thank you for all the supportā¤ļø

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chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

The hate between Malachi and Ravina will grow stronger it seems. And I understand that it's part of the process.But I knew that time will come that the hate diminishes and would later on turn to something new,different and a happy one. I'll wait til then, but will prepare myself now for more angst and hatred. I just wish Ravina can endure all these and remain tough as she is. She's been through a lot! Maybe Malachi can go easy on her for the time being (but I doubt that, the same applies for his clan members)Wonder how he treats her here in his kingdom. Hopefully we see a different side to both characters that'll make them change their own beliefs and perspectives. But I'm curious as to what happened to the King and Ares and their people. thanks for the chap,JazzyšŸ˜Š

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Blooddoctor
BlooddoctorLv13Blooddoctor

Well, I could image how hot Kai's glare was on Ravina...he would be like, "you daughter of a beechšŸ˜‚" Well, I don't know but I like the feeling of this. She isn't just going to face Kai's wrath, she is going to face his family also and a new kingdom. I bet she would have a lovely maid no matter what. Ravina isn't as soft as she looks too, once he gives her a hard time, she does the same. Just like a boomerang! And it goes bang bang! But I know Ares isn't done with Kai, he is gonna come back for Ravina if it means betraying Ravina's uncle. Well, he already betrayed, so betraying continuously sounds like super fun! It's so hot here, Jasmine!

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GoodnessChiamaka
GoodnessChiamakaLv11GoodnessChiamaka

What was Ravina thinking.. they will accept her easily if told them she's his breedmate šŸ¤£, Well since breedmate are respected I wonder if they will respect her knowing she's their enemy daughter and also an inventor or if that will save her from the torture of Malachi's people.. Waiting for her next chapter ā¤ļøšŸ’–šŸ˜, Thank you for the update

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Paschalinelily
PaschalinelilyLv14Paschalinelily

OMG! šŸ˜Æ This chapter... I'm speechless... So, Malachi hates to admit that Ravina is his breedmate in front of his family? My dear Ravina, it looks like your life will become more tough now... šŸ„²

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Sophy_24
Sophy_24Lv4Sophy_24

Hehehehehehehehe...... šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† This is getting better and better and better..... oooh.... The eerie silence, Ravina got him there. Hahahahaha.... I just can't stop laughing at what I just read. I love to see these kinds of tensions eeh. Jazzy Jazzy, please just one more chapter today. I'll be forever grateful šŸ„²šŸ„²šŸ„²

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Tranbri
TranbriLv15Tranbri

Please, I need another chapter. Thanks you. This is amazing.

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Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

This is going to get very interesting and I wonder if he is going to put her in chains and let the others abuse her or if he will take her home and keep her safe. They have so much to learn about each other, including how to trust each other. At least he didn't deny her as his breedmate.

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tasha_26
tasha_26Lv12tasha_26

i bet this is gonna be a bumpy ride for Ravina

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sem20str
sem20strLv15sem20str

Jasmine you are such a genius. Truly. Sometimes I think I could write a story and then I read something like this and realize I am better as a reader after all šŸ˜‚. What a complex journey for all these amazing, complex characters. You gave us a couple we have come to love - Ravina and Ares, who are so imperfectly perfect for each other, and make the ultimate sacrifices for a better world for humanity A king who made the ultimate sacrifices for the same goal. Anoher king who also has a tortured past that we have yet to fully know but who we also already love but are conflicted about because of how much we love Ravina and Ares together. And we canā€™t forget what the aftermath that Ravina left behind her must look like, her sister is still out there, and donā€™t forget Ares appears to be a male breedmate??? I absolutely love this story and am so excited to read more.

Juujuu_Sky
Juujuu_SkyLv14Juujuu_Sky

Awww JasminešŸ˜. I guess I will never get tired of saying this. You. Are. AMAZING!!!!! Thanks a lot for this awesome chapter šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜

CindyPez
CindyPezLv15CindyPez

The more treacherous the story the better šŸ˜…. Canā€™t wait for the next chapter. šŸ¤©

Chandra_Ranell
Chandra_RanellLv14Chandra_Ranell

I believe we will see, dragons arenā€™t as barbaric as human were lead to believe, women are respected, remember is Ravinaā€™s reading, she needs acceptance from Kaiā€™s mommaā€¦. That means womenā€™s opinions are validated. I truly think, humans started this fight, we often fear and destroy that which we donā€™t understandā€¦.. like we have an inferiority complex or somethingā€¦.. I just feel the dragons arenā€™t what they appear to beā€¦.. buckle up buttercup, itā€™s gonna be a bumpy ride!

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Did Malachi put on a show of revulsion towards Ravina for the benefit of his family and members of his clan or what? How will Brena and Kayla feel knowing they have dogged King Malachiā€™s breedmate? Itā€™s going to be a strenuous balancing act for Ravina and Malachi. It would be nice if the members of the Azar family would show their future new family member and queen some hospitality. I have a feeling Malachiā€™s niece and nephew whom he kissed will treat Ravina with kindness because they are young and innocent. Someone in that village has to be in Ravinaā€™s corner.

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

This is going to be a roughhhhh journey.

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HannahBW
HannahBWLv14HannahBW

Roles are now reversed. Letā€™s see how my favorite character, Ravina, handles this. Sheā€™s so strong on the inside and as she said, thrives with pain! I know sheā€™s going to do well with all the hatred. Iā€™m just concerned how she will react if and when she is finally reunited with her sister! I definitely think revenge and manipulation isnā€™t healthy but for her to survive she may need to use it! I wonder if she will self mutilate anymore now that the stakes and stress are higher. I have a feeling sheā€™ll use it to her advantage with Malachi as well.. I can just see the dragons injuring her and when Malachi puts up his fake walls of not caring, Ravina making the injury worse right in front of his eyes to make him suffer. Definitely can see the darkness coming Jaz!

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Hello Jasmine! Please release another chapter today. Please!!

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Tranbri
TranbriLv15Tranbri

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

People do say THERES A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATEā€¦ Ravina and Malachi are about to find that part out no matter how much they hate each other NOW.