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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Dazelda
DazeldaLv15Dazelda

oh god this is also a very tragic love story! I really didn't expect it but I love that about it because it is not a straightforward love and often in real life it actually isn't...

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

Dang!!! Ares is HOT. Seems like she decided to give her first time to him. I can understand her. Why give it to the enemy but will she go through with it? Omg, I don't know anymore. Either way, I am fine with whatever she decides. Brings on the drama and heat đŸŒĄđŸ”„

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

OMG..major development,I think I'm falling for AresđŸ˜±đŸ€­đŸ˜‚đŸ€ŁđŸ’• is he falling in love for Ravina or this is all because he sees how broken she is, or for her protection? I appreciate how he's letting her decide. but I was kinda hurt when Ravina told Ares ,"no feelings involved"💔💔 we'll just have to wait for her decision tomorrow. tack Jazzy💕

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

Wow. I think her first time should be with Ares. It’s not like King Malachi hasn’t had his fair share of being with other women. I hate when the ML in the books get pure virgins. 😂 It isn’t fair. Plus. How will Ravina know just how special her connection with Malachi is down the road if she has nothing to compare it to?

nightknight
nightknightLv12nightknight

They've gone in too deep to start claiming 'no strings attached'. When they finally separate, the ache deep in the heart, tragic doesn't even begin to define it.

Quirkyalone
QuirkyaloneLv13Quirkyalone

Man, this is bad. Every sentence in this chapter made me hold my breathđŸ”„đŸ”„đŸ˜„ If Ares continues like this I'm afraid Malachi's position as ML will be taken away😂

Melissa_Hayes73
Melissa_Hayes73Lv15Melissa_Hayes73

I see a lot of Ares fans but I'm not one of them. Y'all are turned on with the interactions between him and Ravina. I think y'all would be even more turned on if Malachi wasn't chained up. He literally can't seduce her like Ares has been doing. I think it will be way hotter with him than with Ares. I'm okay with who ever she chooses to be her first.

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

I have major conflict over this whole interaction. I was good with her being with him when she had acted as she has something that resembles actual feelings for him. But now, does she? I think she’d rather have her first experience with him than with Malachi, and I get that.l at this point. But I’d rather her be with no one than this
 and maybe it doesn’t matter, but my heart continues to hurt for her. And, I’m petrified she will get pregnant. What does she plan to do that makes tomorrow night different than now?

Elena_650
Elena_650Lv14Elena_650

I’ll tell you the only reason I don’t want Ravina to be with Ares: I don’t want either of them to go through the pain that it will imply. I don’t need the FL to be a wir gin and it even irks me sometimes. Not because I don’t like vir gins, or because I have something against experienced men and innocent girls as every case is a world. It irks me because it is a formula and as such it can be restrictive and get tiring sometimes. But not liking stories about CEO’s or being too fond of werewolves, I know that reading historical romance, maidens is what I'm bound to find. The difference I think always lies in how the characters are constructed and written along with their development and the plot. This way, an experienced man and an innocent girl can be as beautiful as two inexperienced lovers or two experienced ones cause what matters is ATRACTION AND LOVE, although stories about the latter is very rarely found, unfortunatley. All this to say that I don’t need Ravina to be innocent for her encounter with Malachi to be beautiful and meaningful. He isn’t a virgin either, so why should she be? Unless we are making assumptions and he is one, of course.... in which case... well... it shouldn’t matter either, or should it? I mean it would surely be more beautiful that if he is then they would both be by the time they come together but we are back to the same, wir ginity shouldn’t have such power, what matters is the love and respect that they will share... Anyway, I totally understand Ravina wanting to share this first moment with a man she desires and not a man he she hates... it makes every sense. The problem is that, as much as she would like it to be, this isn’t solely about desire... Ares IS good to her. So much in fact that he even advises her to let herself be cared for by her breedmate once the pretence is over... And as much as Ravina fools herself with the no feelings policy, feelings are already there... So, from a strictly strategic point of view, following the logic of no emotions involved, she shouldn’t be with him and from one that admits and takes into account that emotions are already there she shouldn’t be with him either as it would complicate things for them. Me? I would just like to spare them the pain... There are things one is better off not knowing or experiencing. But how would they know? He thinks he will die, and she thinks she will by going with the enemy but hopes to at least bring him down with her in the process...which reminds me, I think Ares knows,... Seems to me like he senses than rather than ending the dragons, she can bring peace with this... well at least that’s the idea I get when I hear him say “You can bring an end to this”. Anyway, Ares is a great character, and I am thankful for him. Malachi will be great as well so I don’t need to pick a team except Ravina’s as Marianne says. Team Ravina## and team growing out of hatred and into understanding and peace##. I hope Ares will live though, and I hope we will be able to see him grown and find the one who is meant for him. Life isn’t black and white, it is messy and complex just like the story and it is also painful as well. From all of it we grow. Let us embrace it and open our minds while Jasmine does her magic and takes us as wherever she intends as it shall be right 💕💕

sem20str
sem20strLv15sem20str

I think so many of us hve all the feels for Ravina and Ares - they clearly care for and understand each other so we’ll! And I think we all want for her first time to be with a man she hs feelings for, but her enemy. Even though we all know she will grow feelings for this enemy as Ares has prophetically stated, wanting the woman he cares for to be loved and safe. What a beautifully complex story, no good guys or bad guys really is there? Well at least so far. Her cousin Andrew we will probably be allowed to clearly hate lter haha. But for now we love both our ML and feel the tension and heartache.

Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

I like this leading lady. She is gutsy and determined.

Somie98
Somie98Lv13Somie98

So sad....is this Romeo and Juliet lol!!!😅😅😅 Ares love for her is one that cannot hold water nor take root despite how deep his feelings for her is.........he's right on one thing thou, Rav going away with Mal can slowly bring an end to this unending war and save others from becoming like whatever he and her uncle has done to themselves. Take heart Ares u made a great decision, Rav can't be tied to a dying man when an opportunity to end the war and have peace is at hand😌😌😌 Tnks Jaz😍😍😍

Paschalinelily
PaschalinelilyLv14Paschalinelily

Author Jasmine is about to kill me! đŸ„șđŸ„șđŸ„ș Please don't let them get together...😭😭 am I asking for too much?

sugarhugs212
sugarhugs212Lv3sugarhugs212

he knew!!!

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I hope Ravina does not give her “V” card to Ares. That would be a disaster. The moments of ecstasy would not be worth the long term adverse consequences.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Many of us want Ravina to give herself to Ares. I understand your point of view; however, the probability of her getting pregnant during a rendezvous with Ares is much too high. Malachi knows that Ravina is likely to conceive if she were sexually active during this time of the month. Malachi very well may not deserve a virgin bride, but that is what he wants. He has already said to Ravina: “You are mine”. We must keep in mind that Malachi is not a human male. Let ’s pretend Malachi accepts Ravina after she has given herself to Ares (which is 99.9% unlikely) and she is unknowingly pregnant with Ares’ child. I can not imagine Malachi accepting a baby of another male as his own. Can you?

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DaoistaIBKv4
DaoistaIBKv4Lv4DaoistaIBKv4

stop playing tug of war author otherwise we gonna break from the middle for sure and end up get hurted.

Juujuu_Sky
Juujuu_SkyLv14Juujuu_Sky

Hmm... They're making it difficult to root for Malachi and Ravina. Ares Steele is just too hot💖💖💖. Thanks, Jazz❀

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Perptal_Charles
Perptal_CharlesLv5Perptal_Charles

Gosh, whats gonna happen next? i have a feeling that this supposed night won't happen😬😬

Loveforevertrue33
Loveforevertrue33Lv12Loveforevertrue33

Jasmine is Malachi another reason to want to kill her. im not an Aris fan Hes playing with her life knowing he is a dead end and she is hot to trot!