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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

lattica
latticaLv5lattica

"Wow the answer would be seduce you Ravina " Malachi

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

He'd kiss you like crazy Ravina, till all that remains is his scent and not that of Ares! (that's what Malachi will do when he's so enraged like he is now) But will win her trust (says his heart) what an emotional rollercpaster of torture this is for Malachi! thanks for the chap Jazzy😊

HannahBW
HannahBWLv14HannahBW

If Ravina thinks the intense passion she had with Ares was something.. she has no idea what’s in store with Malachi! Hate mixed with love for his breedmate is going to make it freaking steamy AF!

Boreas17
Boreas17Lv14Boreas17

They are enemies but their plan is the same. Run away and be each others breedmate😆 i wonder how is Ravina make him believe she's sincere even if she's not😅

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

I think he’d go after Ares first. I just don’t think his dragon will let him kill his beeedmate. But his dragon certainly can’t make him treat her too well
 that part will be a struggle. And nothing currently in play will make Ravina treat him well either.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Wow! Finally, Ravina and Malachi began to communicate with with each other with their insult levels taken down a few notches. Their thoughtful verbal exchange was an unexpected; however, neither of them was being fully honest with the other. Ravina’s naĂŻvetĂ© puts her in a great disadvantage. I don’t think she is aware of the passion mark on her neck. Wouldn’t she have hidden it by wrapping a scarf around her neck prior to heading down to the cave to visit Malachi? I believe Malachi will place hIckeys all over Ravina’s body when given the opportunity to get his hand on her.

Hollygolightly
HollygolightlyLv15Hollygolightly

I love the conversations between Ravina and Melachi. They are both so tortured by their past I can’t help but pity them.

Somie98
Somie98Lv13Somie98

OMG!!he admitted it thou painfully😏😏😏damn his hate is gonna be hard to crack, I wonder what else he's going to negotiate so as to convince Rav So interesting this is indeed tough love😏😏😏

Glimmy
GlimmyLv5Glimmy

They're warming up to each other , that's a good sign

Melissa_Hayes73
Melissa_Hayes73Lv15Melissa_Hayes73

Did Ares bruise her neck? He's trying to be protective thinking that somebody hurt her. He hates himself more than he does her. I really don't think that he would hurt her if she released him. He may want to but I don't think he will. If they could turn this intense hate into love...whoa! That would be hotter than Malachi's dragon breath đŸ”„đŸ”„đŸ”„

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Hello Jasmine! Please release another chapter of this addictive novel today. Please!!

sem20str
sem20strLv15sem20str

Didn’t even realize I was holding my breath!! This is amazing. First, it seems clear that Ares was intentional with ruling her up and leaving an obvoius mark on her. Is this his jealousy and disappointment and showing his claim and effect on her before he hands her over to Malachi? And, I continue to feel for Malachi. He is a prisoner to the pull of this bond and all the things he can smell. He is desperately trying to assert control of the situation and he has no idea she is steps ahead of him. She has already thought of all the things he has said to her - she won’t even have to figure out how to sell it to him as he is trying to sell it to her. Wonder what he will say to try to convince her?

Nevermind_8798
Nevermind_8798Lv4Nevermind_8798

JP_reader20
JP_reader20Lv15JP_reader20

Oh Malachi she is your tamer your breed mate Both of you will suffer a lot before accepting it

Jassar_1
Jassar_1Lv15Jassar_1

OMG i need more!!!! So good!!!!

JediLight_7
JediLight_7Lv15JediLight_7

He said it💕

M_vick99
M_vick99Lv13M_vick99

Finally, he admits it!

Natasha_Njobvu_0442
Natasha_Njobvu_0442Lv4Natasha_Njobvu_0442

the first thing he'll do to you is mark your entire body till all you can remember is his name he'll start with that hickie on your neck my darling..đŸ€­ this is wonderful jasmine đŸ€—

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Ravina has hikies all over her neck from another man how did she think he would react
 What he would do to he would be more than just hikies a lot lot more
 She said she is sacrificing herself for her mission


Hollygolightly
HollygolightlyLv15Hollygolightly

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule