Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame
Touch of Flame
JasmineJosef
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Whoah!! Jasmine, you keep adding more fire to the flames. Creating feelings and emotions between the FL and second ML. Adding more fire to the burning flames and creating a greater heartbreak. I can already imagine myself crying when Ares dies or something... You make me ship Ares and Ravina more and more. I pray Malachi will be there to comfort her when something happens to Ares. Because Ravina and Ares are already growing attached to each other... in fact they are already attached to each other. Thanks Jasmine. Keep up the good work. You are like my favourite author. I really admire u.
WOWWWW - We went from Ravina having a casual thought that she could continue her experiment by becoming Malachi’s Queen and getting the dragons from the inside - which caused her to faint… To lobbying Ares to make a plan WITH HER - and because he is no longer in a position to keep her safe - Which by the way is completley heartbreaking to me. I know Malachi is the main ML BUT - so much of Ares and Ravina go so well together that I find myself wishing they would fight to find a happy ending together. But that is not this story - and he will die from his commitment to this mysterious experiment. So because he cannot keep her safe he seems like he is going to agree to her crazy plan and help her ’escape’ with Malachi and continue her experiment. HOLY COW this is bananas!!! I really did not expect her to get Ares on board like this. Bravo Jasmine I can only anticipate what other twists and turns you have in store for us! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
The last chapter has left me in a dilemma. Ares really cares about Ravina, even though he doesn't intend to instill any further feelings. On the other hand, Malachi is starting to get disturbed when he finds out that Ravina is getting married and is about to leave when he begins to admit that Ravina is his breedmate.
I had a dream about this story last night. Ravina ran to Malachi and quickly started releasing him. She told him he had to hurry before they kept him from leaving. She had (pretend) fallen for him and couldn’t stand seeing him get hurt. She also told him she had a change of heart and forgave him (again pretend) of everything he did. Afterall they had both done and said a lot of horrible things. She was tired of all the pain and people being harmed because of the war between their kind. Of course with her being his breedmate, he melted at her words and asked her to come with him. After much hesitation and contemplating (both pretend and not pretend because she was nervous about the mission) she agreed and he flew her away from there. It ended there but it was really cool to dream about! Your doing so good Jaz! I can’t stand to wait for further chapters to find out what really happens! It’s so good it’s captured my dreams!
Is Ravina trying to help King Malachi escape or does she want to escape with Ares, if so I don't think is a good idea. Her father tried to make peace with the dragon but they refused , she can't use the breedmate to negotiate with Malachi to free him, let her not dream of it.. it not about King Malachi alone other dragons are involve Patiently waiting for the next chapter, thank you ❤️
i'm sad for Ares. he cares for her and want to be happy with her but he will be gone soon. then he can't protect her and Ravina will mourn for him too she will be devastated once again. Looks like their plan is helping Malachi escape. if this plan is successful i'm sure Malachi has some other plans too😏
Today this story moved in a very unexpected direction. Jasmine, you blew your readers’ minds. I like the way you shifted the plot in terms of the relationship between Ravina and Ares. Ravina is going to get much more out of helping Malachi escape than she anticipates. I am looking forward to reading about the techniques Malachi will use in his attempt to woo Princess Ravina, the ice princess. Jasmine, please release another chapter today. Please!
Oh!!well whatever plan they come up with better not blow up in their faces cos we busting Mal outta jail💣💥💣 I just wish things gets much better btw Mal and Rav🏁🏳🏁 team Mal flagging high🏳 Its certain Ares is gonna die whether he marries her or not...he's already a walking corpse no offence🙄🙄🙄 Can't Wait for more🤓🤓🤓
