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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Brandi_Beller
Brandi_BellerLv13Brandi_Beller

I can just feel Malachi’s anger and fustration

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lau001
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Wow!!!!! I’m dying to know how they are going to overcome their issues. Each one has their own valid points to hate each other yet the pull (for him) is so strong! Still so many mysteries regarding their siblings and past… soooo intrigued!! I’m absolutely loving this story! Thank you dear autor for another intense and well crafted chapter! ❤️

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

She is feeling what he is feeling. He overdosed on the sedative and she got dizzy and fainted. Guess you should have read the article without skipping parts. Will he be able to free himself? Not likely, but I am sure she will free him.

sem20str
sem20strLv15sem20str

WOW. Ravina really went for it. And she did know exactly what she was doing. And it truly was the ultimate torture for him. And now she is actually thinking of becoming his queen and basically going undercover in the dragon world? I don’t know how she would ever get him to trust her, and how she would even bring herself to do it. But it would be a wild ride! Phenomenal story Jasmine!!

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amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

What a chapter! Thanks Author J✍️ I thought the last cliffhanger was good and now this one takes the cake 😛

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

ok, this is looking promising. he has the task to escape before her wedding night and she is slightly considering what being his queen would mean. even if she's driven by the wrong reasons at this point, there's promise there ....promise of seeing the two of them together. I hope he kidnaps her. I hope they get to spend time together in his world. I hope they get to see each other more closely, to know each other and to uncover whatever misunderstanding brought this war between their worlds

Princess_Boating
Princess_BoatingLv3Princess_Boating

I feel real bad for Malachi. he cannot get his breedmate and can also not get his revenge. I'm really looking forward to knowing what Ravina is up to. thanks for the wonderful chapter ❤️

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

If chapter 33 was intense,chapter 34 was immense!!! 🔥🔥🔥Well done,Jazzy👏👏👏

maman_farha77
maman_farha77Lv13maman_farha77

why the faint, perhaps it's the mate thing

Paschalinelily
PaschalinelilyLv14Paschalinelily

I loved this chapter 😍😍 Thank you Author Jazz... 🥰 Thanks Onix for the golden tickets that birthed this extra chapter 🤗

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Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

WOW, Jasmine, this is becoming more and more intense, loving this storyline.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I like the sound of the title, “Queen Ravina”. Who will find Ravina in the hallway to the cave? As she was leaving, Malachi yelled “Come back Ravina” instead of ”Come back Princess”. This seems to imply that he is becoming emotionally attached to her.

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Onix_Rain25
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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

dpkasngh
dpkasnghLv5dpkasngh

he called her by her name.. he is high on sedatives... she fainted not before thinking about certain possibilities. . . waiting eagerly for the next update.

emillerdc
emillerdcLv15emillerdc

She is tough as nails - hail queen Ravina!

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

A challenge! I think we are seeing a chance for progress! Feels like a game changer! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Onyii_Okafor_2112
Onyii_Okafor_2112Lv2Onyii_Okafor_2112

This is so emotional. Malachai is really in agony

Kaia234
Kaia234Lv14Kaia234

One more chapter please

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Elena_650
Elena_650Lv14Elena_650

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

kt_cali
kt_caliLv14kt_cali

I’m wondering what uncle will do after finding out Ravina is Malachis breedmate. Will him yelling her name someone heard that. I wonder if Ares will do something stupid after he finds out🤔.

Sel_Murf
Sel_MurfLv15Sel_Murf

gave my golden tix ,let's hope we get that mass release