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Count_Raindrops
Count_RaindropsLv12Count_Raindrops

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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Kaia234
Kaia234Lv14Kaia234

Wow I thought the relationship between Raven and Angelica was a slow burn. This book is gonna take ten years šŸ˜‚

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Vivion1719318
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Thereā€™s so much hate between itā€™s hard to imagine them falling in love and actually having a happy life. I just donā€™t see it right now.

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

So much anger they have against each otherā€¦Itā€™s like a constant stalemate with no progression or even regression. She can read all she wants about breedmates, but she will never understand until she feels it in her heart and believes it in her mind. Only when it touches her soul will she start to understand. But, once she understands it will become harder for her to hate. Once he realizes what she knows and feels, then it will become too hard for him to resist the pull. Ares, will be all but forgottenā€¦eventually. šŸ˜¢ā¤ļøšŸ˜©šŸ˜¬šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„ So many emotions and so many theories!

QueenHalloween16
QueenHalloween16Lv14QueenHalloween16

Can I have more please? šŸ„ŗ

sem20str
sem20strLv15sem20str

Ugh this whole situation is so heart wrenching. Of course he taunted her in the same way abiut her father. They say all is fair in love and war. Here we have so much war and so much potential for love being destroyed by it.

emillerdc
emillerdcLv15emillerdc

I wonder how heā€™s going to react!

Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

Ravina, you might find answers you are not expecting. Kai does not believe itā€™s his brothers, they are planners not mindless terriorizers. This will prompt Kai, to question you on the attack. Is this a renegade group staged by your Uncle and Ares to test their experiment šŸ§Ŗ

amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

The next chapter will be interesting! Iā€™m still not convinced that the dragons are associated with Malachi.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

This Ravina angering Malachi. She'd like to see his reaction,hear what he has to say. But would telling Ravina it's not his brothers (I think he knows for sure,that it's not them) make her anger subside? What if it's another group who made the attack? What if its Uncle's experiments that did that? Like what I said on a previous comment before, that it could be a staged attack only it's Ravi's people that suffered. Will Malachi ask more questions and analyze the situation? Will Ravina satisfy his curiosity or torment him more? I think Ravina skipped the good part in not reading bout the female breedmatešŸ¤­šŸ˜‚ Tack for an interesting chapter JazzyšŸ˜Š

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Jasmine, thank you for this very interesting chapter. It is so good that I need a second helping. I am looking forward to the next questions that Malachi will ask Ravina. Also, I can hardly wait for her responses. Ravinaā€™s fear of Malachi harming her seems to have lessened significantly. I wonder how he feels about that. Will Malachi asked Ravina questions about Ares?

Melissa_Hayes73
Melissa_Hayes73Lv15Melissa_Hayes73

Here goes my theory and I'd love to hear what y'all think. Her uncle and Ares are keeping a BIG secret from her that would make her even want to end her own life, according to what Ares thinks. They have these 'experiments' they are doing. What I think they're doing is keeping some dragons that nobody knows about and every now and then, they let them out so they can test their weapons on them. While Ravina and the kingdom thinks they are heroes for killing these black dragons, the truth is that they are letting innocent people get killed. She would be horrified if she found out about that. Not to mention that she could've also been killed if Ares hadn't been watching her so he could save her. Ares and the king were ready too quickly for this to have been a surprise. I think this was a planned attack. They want others to think that Malachi's family were killed but I'm not convinced that was his family...and neither was he.

Mara_Heller
Mara_HellerLv15Mara_Heller

Ravina, you're poking where you should not......

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

I'm hoping for a few chapters of their interaction coming after this. thank for this chapter, Jasmine.

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

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Christabel_Chisom
Christabel_ChisomLv3Christabel_Chisom

Oh, the hatred is something else

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Annicaknowles
AnnicaknowlesLv2Annicaknowles

It is funny how we try our best to shift blame from the ML. Sorry to say that he is only tasting his own cruel words šŸ¤·ā€ā™€ļø.

Count_Raindrops
Count_RaindropsLv12Count_Raindrops

She is going to be in for a wake up call when after spewing all this anger, she feels sad instead of satisfied. Sheā€™ll probably brush it off as pity, but just like she started to feel with Ares, her heart is opening.

0rtiz113
0rtiz113Lv140rtiz113

Just a quick question for the authorā€¦ Are you planing a mass release any time soon? I Know its a lot of work but just being curious šŸ¤Ø

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Paschalinelily
PaschalinelilyLv14Paschalinelily

Hehehe... šŸ˜…šŸ˜…I can only laugh at the end of this chapter

Boreas17
Boreas17Lv14Boreas17

there's too much hate between them. i think Ravina is overly confident when she knows Uncle and Ares have a big secret. it doesn't cross her mind they could have a hand in this attack. what would Malachi's brother gain from attacking a Village anyway.šŸ¤·ā€ā™€ļø