Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

what transition is King Uncle having? Turning into a dragon? but why assume that he'd be a monster?(coz that's what they thought the Black Dragons and the rest are?) wonder what Ravina is soon to unlock (chapters?🤪😅✌️🤣)with that key given by her Uncle. you're getting me confused with Ares, Jazzy! 🥺I don't know what to think anymore bout him..seems a gentleman on here (and after all, he did save Ravina) But the bold thing on this chap is, Ravina wanting to sleep on the very same room as him!!😱😱 thanks for the chap😊

Jasmine Shout out for you at keeping us readers engaged, confused with the plot of the story and waiting and wanting for more!!! I Love the story so far, and you are right I was trying to look for a bad and a good guy type of setting. I‘m just going to sit back and wait for your wonderful writing gift to surprise! Keep the chapters coming and thank you 😊

I don't know if I can tolerate anything between Ravina and Ares, and then, She ending up as Malachi's breedmate... 😭😭 I am a very jealous person, so I don't like sharing... 🥲

Bites fingers nervously .. Nothing would happen ... . Nothing would happen .. .. NOTHING WOULD HAPPEN! Jazz, are you teasing me? I love Ares but I want Malachi, unless of course, it's a reverse harem

Uh oh! This could be hotter than his burns. 🔥🔥🔥

interesting... hope Ares wouldn't take advantage of her innocence . Although his hurt, it might just end in a cuddling session 🙄

All these cliffhangers... I don’t know if my weak heart can take it.

i don't trust Uncle sorry. after making sure she doesn't learn what they're up to, even making code language and all, why would he reveal he's going through transition easily? even he's in transition there's more to it he's hiding that i'm sure. also Ares better not try sth funny🔪

seems like i will fall for ares again, king malachi can you please do something to make me stay? Thanxs Jazzy for the surprise chapter

I am not sure Ares will let her stay until after their wedding. I am sure he actually cares for her in that way, but then again he does like to experiment 🤔. Will he find her not challenging enough though or will he take full advantage of her and take her virtue? If he turns her away now, her only option would be to go to Malachi and talk to him. I think maybe the key is to Malachi's shackles.

am curious about the dark secrets the key holds, and why and how does it involve the prisoner(Malachi)

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Well🤔 don't get it twisted.

Oh Ravina the last sentence was too bold, patiently waiting for what will follow.

So the uncle is going to turn in to a dragon buy taking dragon blood i wonder if he has something to do with his drother death

Beautifully written. So much suspence.. I don't know who to fall for, Ares or King Malachi.

Wow, this chapter revealed quite a bit about Uncle. I think he is has gone to the dark side trying to get revenge. It almost reads like he is turning into a dragon🤔. Malachi has a lot of explaining to do about the day Ravinas father died.

Oo Ravina needs Ares to snuggle her

Every chapter leaves me worj more questions. What is the full story with her uncle? Is he drinking blood and actually becoming a dragon, or is he speaking metaphorically? As for the end of this scene… I think Ravina just needs comfort. She has lost so much. I think Ares will not take advantage of her vulnerability, but who knows… I can’t wait for the next chapter to find out what happens!