Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Ok again, this has to be the hottest slow burn ever!! Two hot guys, three experiments in process…. All playing with fire - both metaphorically and literally. Will Ravina finally understand that yes Malachi senses her as his breed mate? Will Malachi try outright seduction next? Will Ravina ‘progress’ to seduction herself? And what about Ares - how far will he go to keep Ravina in the dark about his business with her Uncle - and how far does she want him to go?? So many ways to go and all of them 🔥🔥

Can’t wait to find out more about Malachi’s family! Thank you for the bonus chapter!!!

thank you so much for this extra chapter, Jasmine! and while we joke around about bribing and these bonus chapters are much appreciated , please know that my little gift to you is beyond well deserved and nothing was expected in return. I simply love your work and am happy to be here for the ride!!!

We need details of Malachi's fam! Why Malachi's father thinks he's not fit or weak to be king? Well he can prove himself that he will be a strong and great king!( and I think it lies with his breedmate too *Ravina*) The slow torture gets to ya🤭Well done Jazzy 😍❤️ thanks for the chap💕

Jasmine, you are a master of intrigue. You have your readers dangling on a string. I am looking 👀 forward to the moment when fire and ice passionately embrace and create steam that becomes a thick blanket of fog. In the meantimentime, I would like to know what happened to Malachi’s sister and brother. I want to understand the origin of Malachi’s rage.

Thank you for the extra chapter. Lord Steele said Ravina is a challenge and he is experimenting with her. Also, he told her uncle that he will take care of her. It's strange that he turns her on and then just stops before it can go to far. I wonder if they know she has been going to see Malachi and watching her 🤔. There is definitely something more to that. And why is she the only one left in her family still at the castle. I could see this going in several directions 🤔

They can keep telling themselves they are enemies… I‘m sure things will get well worse with them, and more torture and gore… but some day it will turn around. In what, like 5 or 6 months?! 😱🤣

Well well well,we came near to a sweet spot but are now back to the pits of a whole new torture😵😵😵😵 Is this never ending😩😩😩😩frustration really is hitting me bad over here dear author[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

There is always a thin line between love and hate.

Malachi said he knew who killed her father. was it Malachi's father? if not maybe it's sth to do with Uncle, Malachi's father, Ravina's father and probably Ares. and same thing now may effect Ravina. that's why they're talking about her being in danger

jasmine I got to power ready today. it's been a super busy week. life with a full time Job and 5 kids then getting ready to go on vacation sure took a lot out of me everyone left today without me due to work. I leave after work tomorrow to join them so I may not be able to read much till next Sat. keep them coming! we're getting closer. she needs to get rid of lord shady although he must be an amazing kisser according to a few chapters ago.

Thanks Onix, Waiting to read about how Ravina felt and reaction towards Malachi.

Ravina and Malachi is slowly feeling the connection, sooner or later both will be trapped in their feelings.

Does anyone how often the author will update these story?

I thought I would not get drawn into this book. Ravania and Malicha the interaction is hard to put into words other than you want to see her heart melt and his denial keeps me wanting to know what happens next! Then Lord Ares, I think he is playing Ravania And that is changing her but will he turn out to be a pirate vs a Lord. Jaz you keep out doing yourself in your books! Awesome!💕

i think so far, Probably King Malachi family was also tortured by the humans as well, probably King Malachi brother is at the verge of death as to why Malachi wants to avenge on his brother behalf, and maybe that's why they killed Ravina parents before wanting all humans end. I want more Chapters, Am patiently waiting to see the end.❤️

Onix-Rains thank you for bribing our author. the story is getting interesting day by day and I need more

oh he's conflicted. conflict between responsibility and desire.our poor king Malachi. I sometimes pity the guy

Oh i hope when he gets out he takes her with him.