Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

these two are at each other's throats, but I think both of them find their encounters agitating yet amusing😏 So nice to know Malachi's thoughts and yep he's drawn to Ravina this early on🤭 She may be an enemy now (at least that's what half of his thought is) but she won't be that anymore soon. It would be nice to know Ravina's thoughts too on Malachi other than being an enemy tack Jazzy 💕 getting interesting as chapters come😊

oh this story is so interesting. always looking forward for more.thanks Jas

I wonder if she will bring him water and food now since he is telling her how hungry he is. She is intrigued by him and him by her. Will she dig the bullet out of him again 🤔. I wonder what torture she has in mind with the breedmate information 🤔.

now malach has detected a scent of a man on his mate will be there the turn of missions? i mean instead of killing the people in the palace he is gonna kill the man seducing his mate.

there's a lot of tension in the air. Malachi is talking about getting his hands on her but i feel like he wouldn't harm her when that happens things would go different way instead🤭

OMG!!!these two are gonna be super hot couple can't wait, just as they are always on each others neck so will they be madly in love😍😍😍😍

i hate the fact that the hatred between them will bring them so much pain

I love this story!

I would like to see more of their exchanges; always getting riled up for anything that comes between them.

Alrighty Vina lets get you back to your chamber so you can continue reading right where you left off📚 lets stay focused lol 😂 On a side note i feel like lord steele might of followed her 🤔 he is not easy to fool it seems

more update plz

*Malachi's pov*: She's your ... don't think of the word. How can she be my .. no,no,no . It's impossible. Not this colourless creature. If only she was a dragon. She would have been my queen. *Ravina's pov*:I'm gonna make him regret what he said but first,I have to find out if he attracted by my scent so I can lure him I'm and also find my sister. I should also prepare to get married. *My pic*: Look at them🥰. I can already feel soooo much love in the air. I only hope that Lord Steel is a good person and sure Malachi , Ravina will surely be your queen. Thank you Jasmine. You are sooo wonderful💓💓💓🥰😍

of course he would Ravina and he's going to wish he hadn't said that.

Who will break down first here? Him or her? I feel it may be him first, but I’m afraid of what she will do to him in the interim 🙈

He is going to regret a lot of things one day!! You too though Ravina. For him hee scent and his awareness of her as his mate is overpowering I wonder what will trigger her?

Jasmine, Girl! I enjoyed reading this chapter. Malachi’s telling Ravina that he would prefer to see her naked is a strong indication of his desire for her. He may have made that statement to intimidate Ravina; but, I belive he told her what was exactly on his mind. He just can’t help himself. He is intoxicated. I am looking forward to Ravina’s resuming her reading about breedmates. Now that Malachi knows that Ravina danced with one particular man, he may begin asking her about her male suitor(s). We shall see. I am looking forward to the next interactions between Ravina and Malachi.

Cant wait for even more of this story. It’s so good. I’m excited to find out how Malachi feels about the scent of a man on ravina and interested to see if ravina brings him anything to eat/drink since he mentioned starving… after all she was torturing him by being “nice” bc he hates it lol

one more chapter, pleeeeeeeeease!!!